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I am more than surprised by this newest chapter and how quickly it came. it felt so real I was amazed. The torn feelings, the guilt, the what you want is NOT what you need. It was so beautiful and touching. I am glad the house was spelled to prevent harm, and that that was explained. It should help ease Harry. Harry will hopefully see that, yes, he will mess up, but there will be forgiveness. And that doesnt need pain/violence for him to be forgiven.

AND SHE HAD AN ABORTION!?
That is the greatest plot twist I think I have read. Usually its just 'she cheated'. Or at worst 'the kid isnt harrys'. But an abortion?
Sheer. Brilliance.

I am at the edge of my seat once more for this incredible story.

It is motivating me to finally move my lazy self and write a fiction finally.

*pokes you with a stick* stop being so mean. What did they tell?

so hope dray will forgive harry. so wondering what question (for ginny) harry gave to lucius. very good chapter

I think u would make a good Ravenclaw.

hey
brilliant chapter
cant wait to find out what dean told harry
cant wait to find out what harry wrote for Lucius to ask ginny
please update
cullengal101

That was just plain mean.

I will say, while I enjoy this story, I must admit Harry was so beyond wrong in the last chapter he should have something happen to him. Be it an epiphany or otherwise backlash. Draco may have pushed, but to make light of the fact that he threw his lover-the one who has had his back this whole time and loved him even through his issues-against a wall is unacceptable. Regardless of them being two men or three, that is spousal abuse. I couldnt care less if he cant control his magic, as I am sure Draco WOULD care and forgive him for that, a little bit of crying and hugging him and saying 'sorry' over and over isnt really enough.

Severus' reaction wasnt even that real for me. He heard his lover, his first lover, was hurt, and all he cared for was Harry. He didnt even say anything to Harry about it. It was only about Harry, that's it, Harry. And yes Draco will blame himself, which is great. The victim gets to feel worse for asking his lover to open up. And Lucius? "Apologize, If you feel you must." I didnt realize hurting your son was suddenly ok?

I get Harry is damaged but he freaking slammed his lover into the wall and everyone is more looking at it likes its Dracos fault than Harrys. If Harry is truly that damaged and unstable then he should NOT be around others. Period. That is abuse.

I dont think Harry needs to be beaten down more than he was, but just because he is going through things doesnt mean it's light and ok that he did that to Draco. It's a bit upsetting to see it seemingly dealt with so lightly.
I'll wait for the update to see how Harry handles it and with Draco. I could honestly not give a crap what news Harry got, no matter how shocking, but likely it will just soften everyones hearts easier to Harry having done some spousal abuse. Hopefully next chapter it can be resolved and not simply swept under the rug, but properly addressed.

hope all is going to be well with my 3 favorite men !!!! can't wait to see what Dean said to Harry !!!!!!! hope to see Ginny in hell soon :):)!!!!!!

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Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job done :)

Love the story. Can't wait for each chapter to come out. That said.......this is the second cliffhanger in a row!! 👿