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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
Upon re-reading, I spotted this:
" . . . The green of his eyes were almost completely hidden by the large, black eyes.. . ."
Do you mean his pupils? 'Cause otherwise that sentence doesn't make sense.
Upon re-reading, I spotted this:
" . . . The green of his eyes were almost completely hidden by the large, black eyes.. . ."
Do you mean his pupils? 'Cause otherwise that sentence doesn't make sense.
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hey
great story so far
please keep updating
cullengal101
great story so far
please keep updating
cullengal101
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh good shit I can't believe that that Ginny will get away with more shit!!!! don't you dare let her get away with nothing let Lusius kill her in court in and out !!!!!!!! so cute Harry with Snape !!!!! Thanks for the update, loved it !!!!!:):)
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i so hate her. thought i had an evil look when she went crazy after lucius name came out. im wondering what she is gona try and do now, but i hope it backfires in her face. She must be an idiot for forgetting about her killing harry pet snake.
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhrgh! Evil beotch. Ginny I mean
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July 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I had stumbled on this today...yesterday.....Alright I just could not stop reading till I finished all you had. I love it so much. It has such great though and attention to detail. I have not read this good of a fanfiction in a long time. I cant wait to see where this progresses and I look forward to reading more in the future.
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Harry and Ginny don't get me started with her the bitch !!!!!!! so glad that Draco's dad is going to take the case ...let him put her under for all that she did..Hermione for being so smart she acted like a dumb bitch ....hope they all pay for what they did to him...Draco's reaction was priceless !!!!!!! Thanks so much for the update !!!!!!
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting an accidental fire caused from a nightmare! You named the title correctly because I was surprised! I am glad Lucius is going to help going after Ginny. I think the abuse and Hermione going off on Harry set him up to retreat from everything without a confrontation because a younger Harry would have went after Ginny for what he suspected her of doing.
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised, but I loved the fact that Lucius was the one that got him to talk. This was a great chapter, lots of information and fantastic progress with Harry. Enjoyed.