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for In the Blood

by xtp10279

person sarlanda
schedule September 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well done

person kazavan
schedule November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was hot. And you didn't even go to the sex. Bastard. Please continue?
person JennWynx
schedule May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE?!!! Continue this. You have NO idea how absolutely frustrating it is to find GREAT sexual prose with such drama and flair. It is like almost no one understands the depth of characterization anymore, and the few that do, like you TORMENT their readers with fake promises! It HURTS! Breaks my goddamned heart, it does. Don't tease me. Please, don't tease when I am this keyed up. Gods I love written porn!!!!
person Heather
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please continue this story. That was the hottest thing I have read in ages! Whoever your friend is they are a lucky lucky person to get this as a birthday present. I also am in love with your plot, its like the best of both worlds the smut is amazing but the story and your ideas behind it make it believable rather than totally ooc as it could if you hadn't written it so well. I look forward to seeing if there is more :)
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.....*breathles*

Oh it's perfect absolutely so. The plot, yes there was one I noticed, amazing.

Bad but sweet Lucius.

Sequel would be highly anticipated. This one shot was perfect. But more is always appreciated.
person kitty5tatts
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please don't let this go! I undertsand some need to remain a one shot, but this one needs to continue. While neither necessarily need to be " healed" by what they're doing, something a little closer to soulcalm is in order, especially for Hermione....and maybe a touch for Lucius too. Thanx for reading my rant if you do. I live this lifestyle 24/7, my email is darlenegopp@gmail.com if you would like to ask any questions.
person akcchamp
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it; please continue