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Omg Draco you shouldn't take it too literal people say things they don't mean when angry please don't do anything stupid or try to prove your like your father when you are not. Hopefully he won't do anything stupid and Hermione can tell him or prove to him she did not mean those things. I'm sure she will catch him doing something she doesn't like and will drag him away and talk to him and if talking wont help then she can pin him and kiss him. Actions speak louder then words. -_- right when they kiss they had to say things neither meant now I have a feeling things will go down hill and it will be impossible to have them be friendly towards each other. :(

ooh draco, don

Ow, he kissed her, sweet.

And they got into an argument....

Hermione is a bit of a Mary Sue, can you make her a bit more edgy, she's a bit like a stuffed pink bunny, all cute and adorable, at least when she had fallen out with Ron she was a bit more edgy.

Good story. I lovery how true you stay to the characters personalities and don't try to change who they are. It is moving a little slow but it keeps me engaged!

I've read this somewhere else and unless you're the same author, you have stole and copywrited this story. In the actual 36 chapter so farish novel, the author stated that she was informed of someone copying her story. I suggest you stop this if this is you. I apologize if you are the real author and just wanted to expand youre fame but I'm just looking out for the original author

Sorry, my bad. Your the same author , I apologize if I caused any confusion, I'm hoping you did find the fraud though. Good luck in later endeavors. I myself have been working on novels since I was 13 and now at a broad age of 28 I have completed around 14 multi chartered fanfics. Mostly based around the legend of Zelda. I think your writing is very gripping and you have a interestingly good talent of describing accurate family drama. Well done.

Aaah - loving this Blaise!

all the progress that has been made just flushed down the toilet
some times peoples' big mouths need to say shut
one doesn't need to point out every little bit especially when their pal is so angry about everything and then being told hey your become friends with your enemies....
sometimes it is best to let things play out

poor draco having to prove to be a bad guy when he is really not!