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for A Dark Room

by BitterWind

schedule July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I didn't realize I was holding my breath until I let it out. This was an intense story and I truly got lost in it. Thank you for that escape. You write wonderfully. Please keep it up! 

person kristienuuna
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That is a great story..
Awesome..
Please make another oneshot again thor..
I love your idea..
person B
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dramione done right.
person cpetnm
schedule May 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, very hot! You write in a very elegant way. :)
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mother of god, this cannot end there!
AWSOME!
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this little escapism piece. Well written!
person Trelweny
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow. That was the most drawn out intense experience I think I've ever read.

I would dearly love to know what happens after... but at the same time nothing else could be written in quite the same style so I could understand if it was left as is.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was quite well done. I especially liked the moment when the room was illuminated by the lightning. You could really feel their emotions at the revelation of the other's identity.
I hope to see more work from you in the future!
person dweek
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a ride of emotions that was kind of intense to read. A ride I enjoyed. My one comment is that I don't feel you summary really goes. I didn't find the story silly at all. I do hope to see more by you in the future, I will be putting you on my watch list.