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Chapter 3: Hot and disturbing. I like it gritty

Lovely little story.

And you're right seeing old pictures make wonder I they're deceased, and when they are known to be dead I try to look if I can tell by their picture, eyes mainly.... But no I cannot.

so glad to see them getting together again even if it's slowly...and Fred to help them with what he said to them Thanks for the update !!!!!!!

Loved the end of this chapter. I'm glad Hermione is coming around; I was upset at her missing out on learning through Tonks' request for a picture out of sheer stubbornness. I realize she was overwhelmed with what she had discovered, but as it was entirely her fault for snooping I have little sympathy for her there.

I'm really enjoying the different reactions of the dead/spirits. Sure, it's making me cry near continuously, but it's very interesting and somewhat cathartic. Tonks with her gum-chewing, acceptance of her cousin, and wanting to leave something for Teddy had me laughing, crying, and feeling warm all at once. Fred wanting to wait for George but having to be convinced to go on ahead was heart-wrenching, but I liked the closure George was hopefully able to gain from it just as much as I liked Fred's opinion on Draco and Hermione.

I think this chapter really drove home for me that although Draco might have changed his opinion on blood-purity before the end of the war it was the Fear of Voldemort that fueled his beliefs that the Dark Lord would win. It's a stance I cannot recall having read taken before in a fanfic and one I think opens a WHOLE new kettle of fish. LOGICALLY, such a stance would make more sense. I mean, Voldemort was a powerful and experienced wizard. Harry was a very INexperienced boy. Add experiencing Voldemort's power firsthand and it's really no wonder Draco would think they would win no matter What he wished or hoped would come to be.
Perhaps if Hermione could understand the logic it would be easier to forgive him his choice.

Thanks so much for writing.

Ow I'm so sorry just found your new story will read and review ;0)

I usually run in the opposite direction of sorrowful tales, but this one is too beautiful to miss (even if I have to work up the courage to continue).

There is so much in this chapter! You managed to transition between naked Draco and solemn, respectful Draco beautifully. He and Hermione are complex people with a lot of history and your story manages to handle that depth and not let either of them devolve into a two-dimensional caricature of themselves. ...It was moving and so appropriate that George got to speak with Fred before he was prepared for burial. I was glad he urged Draco and Hermione to explore a future relationship.,,,Special thanks from me for the magical details you gave us when describing memento mori photographs and the creation of wizard portraits. You did a masterful job of creating believable magical methods for them. I think you got it just right and JK would be pleased..Fred's funeral was a powerful scene, beautifully described. One last thing: I liked "Six Feet Under" too.

Interesting with the painting and photo. Naughty Hermione for being sneaky, and I can't blame her for being wary of Draco with his lack of faith (lesson learned for him). Happy that the two will start over. Will Hermione continue to help Draco with the rest of the departed? Will Draco go with Hermione to find her parents?

Again you have me thinking about a movie. This time it was "Highlander". George wanting Fred to move on, because it meant he would still suffer watching his love ones age and die, just like how Connor stayed with his beloved Heather until the day she died. A very beautiful and heart-breaking scene for me, especially with Queen singing "Who Wants To Live Forever" in the background.

Now to the most important part...
Remus Lupin: who remains us that we should never doubt that we are unworthy to be happy and loved because of the circumstances that we had no control over. You were always more of a man than a monster.

Nymphadora Tonks: who never gave up on love, even that love thought it was unworthy. You brought so much color into this world.

Fred Weasley: who shared the responsibility of making sure laughter still continued even in the darkest of times. You remain us that we don't always have to be serious.

Very touching.

I am really enjoying this story. I think the way you are handling the dead is beautiful. I like Draco and Hermoine in this story. I enjoy it when Draco is portrayed as a hero. He may not have made all the right choices but he did what needed to be done. I can't wait to see how this unfold. I think you have an amazing tallent. If I had my way we would be watching this on tv. It would make a kick ass show! :o)

Best of luck to you!