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August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a perfect, well-paced, unusual story that I absolutely loved.I re-read the whole thing today and found more new insights into wizarding culture and views of the afterlife with the second reading. Well done.
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story sooo much!! everyone and each! please do not stop writing
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a completely beautiful story.
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June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely and satisfying ending! I've enjoyed learning about all the magical elements you invented and death customs you explained. Very creative and insightful story and a steamy romance as well. Great job.
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June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a wonderful story
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You mean the real deal? As in BC?
Oh and loved your story, your descriptiveness is remarkable.
Oh yes the holidays, my kids read Dutch luckily ;). *cheers*
Oh and loved your story, your descriptiveness is remarkable.
Oh yes the holidays, my kids read Dutch luckily ;). *cheers*
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful ending !!!!! so good !!! hope to see more of your stories soon !!!!:):):)
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A lovely ending for the living and the dead.
Before I fulfill your request (I still find that very surprising by the way), I have to get something off my chest. You were so kind when I talked about my aunt that I would truly appreciate it if you would do so again. Her health has gotten worst over the last few months. She is on dialysis. Due to her bad health, she has been denied a new kidney for the high chance it will be in vain. If she could take a kidney, she wouldn't take one from family for that fear that it would be in vain. We are working on getting her into a nursing home or (more hopefully) an independent living home, for she truly can no longer live alone. She puts on a brave face in hopes of not being a burden, and even lying to her sons about her condition. We have even been informed that it maybe a couple years before she can no longer be treated by dialysis and we must prepare ourselves. So please, send good prayers, wishes, thoughts, anything to my Aunt Tami. Thank you.
As for your request, you will have to look for my second review. I made long, and thought it should have it's own space. Feel free to use it in another story if you like.
Before I fulfill your request (I still find that very surprising by the way), I have to get something off my chest. You were so kind when I talked about my aunt that I would truly appreciate it if you would do so again. Her health has gotten worst over the last few months. She is on dialysis. Due to her bad health, she has been denied a new kidney for the high chance it will be in vain. If she could take a kidney, she wouldn't take one from family for that fear that it would be in vain. We are working on getting her into a nursing home or (more hopefully) an independent living home, for she truly can no longer live alone. She puts on a brave face in hopes of not being a burden, and even lying to her sons about her condition. We have even been informed that it maybe a couple years before she can no longer be treated by dialysis and we must prepare ourselves. So please, send good prayers, wishes, thoughts, anything to my Aunt Tami. Thank you.
As for your request, you will have to look for my second review. I made long, and thought it should have it's own space. Feel free to use it in another story if you like.
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now I give you The Eulogy of Professor Severus Snape
When we first met you, you were not the most likeable person.
You made yourself hard, cold, and cruel.
Years of being the man who many considered heartless,
In the end, you had more heart than any of us could even imagine.
Rejected most of your life, you never allowed it to make you weak.
Even when the love of your life turned her back on you,
For a mistake you forever wished to take back, but too late to do so,
Your love for the woman who eventually married you most hated rival,
You still carried that love and did all you could and more
To keep her safe from those who wanted her dead.
After losing her again, but this time to a true monster,
Your love still continued over the years.
It was that love, that undying love,
That showed you had the heart and soul of a true hero,
Even when you casted yourself as a villain.
There was more to you than meets the eye.
To Professor Severus Snape,
A man who will be remembered as a Hero for years to come.
Always
When we first met you, you were not the most likeable person.
You made yourself hard, cold, and cruel.
Years of being the man who many considered heartless,
In the end, you had more heart than any of us could even imagine.
Rejected most of your life, you never allowed it to make you weak.
Even when the love of your life turned her back on you,
For a mistake you forever wished to take back, but too late to do so,
Your love for the woman who eventually married you most hated rival,
You still carried that love and did all you could and more
To keep her safe from those who wanted her dead.
After losing her again, but this time to a true monster,
Your love still continued over the years.
It was that love, that undying love,
That showed you had the heart and soul of a true hero,
Even when you casted yourself as a villain.
There was more to you than meets the eye.
To Professor Severus Snape,
A man who will be remembered as a Hero for years to come.
Always
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May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Beautifully written again. The unspoken words are the strongest in your work. I value them, your descriptiveness amazing.
Bur calling the deceased man Benedict?! *sighs*
Bur calling the deceased man Benedict?! *sighs*