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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice little story. It reminded me of one of your older ones. A veela fic years ago.
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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Also, don't feel discouraged by less than stellar reviews. Your writing quality hasn't gone down. This was a short fic so there's less time to create complex environments and plot devices. It was very nice for what it was and a lot of people really enjoy short stories over novel length docs. I happen to enjoy the long ones the best.
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May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow you surprised me at the end, did not think that Draco would want him !!! but we are talking about Draco here ...really good ending Thanks !!!!!!
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May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was good, really, really great!
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May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Personally I like this idea. I want Draco to get out of his ass and say the truth... 'cause I think he's hot for Harry as he's been all his life... but then it's your story so...
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May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What's a prompt?
Harry did use an explosive. As a 12 years old kid, for a clumsy distraction.
As a 18 years old who survived the sacrifice of his life for everyone including those he liked the least, it's way out of character, not to mention he plainly did it out of malice instead of some great rushed and risky plan. Harry would have wanted to defend "his" instigated peace by taking the issue directly with Blaise and maybe argue hotly in the middle of the class.
As for the quality of your work, I don't know... Maybe I've been reading too many rich and complex novels lately. Maybe I'm comparing the quality of what I remembered reading from your hand a few years ago - which I held is very high regards - to what I am reading from books today. Maybe the quality didn't change and I just gained new perspective. I wouldn't know unless I go back to a story you wrote a few years ago like The Soldier's Welcome or Changing of the Guard.
Btw, about ch.3: will there be any mentions at all about certain life debts, or how Harry saved Draco's ass in the Room of Requirements, or Goyle's death, or their mutual summer activities when the war was officialy over and how it changed them or their future prospect? Draco seems to be a prick for no reason, a gleeful imp who sound like he just can't wait to be the first to chant that the Great Harry Potter is gone forever and it's his fault.
Harry did use an explosive. As a 12 years old kid, for a clumsy distraction.
As a 18 years old who survived the sacrifice of his life for everyone including those he liked the least, it's way out of character, not to mention he plainly did it out of malice instead of some great rushed and risky plan. Harry would have wanted to defend "his" instigated peace by taking the issue directly with Blaise and maybe argue hotly in the middle of the class.
As for the quality of your work, I don't know... Maybe I've been reading too many rich and complex novels lately. Maybe I'm comparing the quality of what I remembered reading from your hand a few years ago - which I held is very high regards - to what I am reading from books today. Maybe the quality didn't change and I just gained new perspective. I wouldn't know unless I go back to a story you wrote a few years ago like The Soldier's Welcome or Changing of the Guard.
Btw, about ch.3: will there be any mentions at all about certain life debts, or how Harry saved Draco's ass in the Room of Requirements, or Goyle's death, or their mutual summer activities when the war was officialy over and how it changed them or their future prospect? Draco seems to be a prick for no reason, a gleeful imp who sound like he just can't wait to be the first to chant that the Great Harry Potter is gone forever and it's his fault.
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May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I for one think the story is very good. I have no problems believing the characters as you have shown them. Draco would want his freedom, and Ginny wouldn't want a loveless marriage any more than anyone else would. I do have to confess that I am now hoping for Luna to say something to Draco that will at least make him think a bit about it.
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May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Draco is a sod ok !!!! he doesn't want Harry so leave him alone already and Ginny selfish bitch just thinking of herself !!!! you can see that I'm not a Ginny lover here....poor Harry can't believe that none wants him....sad.... Thanks for the update !! :)
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May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is certainly interesting and original idea for a story. Loving it so far and waiting for Draco to hit his head because things surely are not right in there at the moment ;)
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May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Well at least it wasn't an unconditional 'no'. Ginny is willing to be a last resort if all else fails. Nothing selfish about what she is doing, she doesn't want him in a loveless bond any more than she wants to be in one. This way he can look for every alternative he can and if he comes up empty she will then be his mate and he will live. Honestly not the course of action. Would suck if she agreed right off the bat only for him to regret it when a more suitable option presents itself.
-Wow even when he supposedly gets what he wants, Draco still feels the need to be a petulant child about it. He should have just said yes if he is gonna get an attitude about Harry trying to stay alive. And It wouldn't exactly bode well for him if Harry did in fact die due to him not agreeing to be bound to him and Hermione or Ron'accidentally' let it slip to the public that he was the primary cause of the savior of the wizarding worlds demise. He would be a pariah.
- "I wish I knew someone I could ask. Someone who already liked me enough to consider it, but not enough to be in love with me. Someone who wouldn
-Wow even when he supposedly gets what he wants, Draco still feels the need to be a petulant child about it. He should have just said yes if he is gonna get an attitude about Harry trying to stay alive. And It wouldn't exactly bode well for him if Harry did in fact die due to him not agreeing to be bound to him and Hermione or Ron'accidentally' let it slip to the public that he was the primary cause of the savior of the wizarding worlds demise. He would be a pariah.
- "I wish I knew someone I could ask. Someone who already liked me enough to consider it, but not enough to be in love with me. Someone who wouldn