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Good story so far, cant wait to see what Harry does to the client or Vernon.

Love this story! It's extremely interesting and a very unique plot. Waiting to see what happens next. :D

Even if you see him lazy it doesn't really show and in canon all the wizardborn were really lazy so I think Laziness and ambition are not antonyms, I would moreover say Harry is very cunning and when someone is cunning and ambitious enough he very well may reach his dreams without doing much, let others work for you kind of thing so I can see Harry in Slytherin, but yeah Ravenclaw would be okay too, but you described how Harry wants to leave the role Vernon gave him with the Dursleys, the canon sentence "you could be great" comes to mind^^
Loved the new chapter thanks for the Harry POV really interesting, I love his interactions with the animals even though I'm arachnophobic.
I liked the short sentence which alludes to a distinction between Harry as his magic made him and Harry the still 6 year old child with childish hopes/dreams/wishes but I think with animals who will be smarter in the future who support him and more years with being the odd child out Harry will lose his insecurities and be what he wants to be, so I'm eager to see if you characterize him the same in the future

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I like this story so far, I'm quite eager to see what is with Harry there seem to be a bleeding of Tom's memories if I got it right and he seemed robotic like in the first chapter like Vernon programmed him and I want to see what consequenzes his comment about the shadow will have, at the moment it seems Harry is quite submissive but you forshadowed that this will change and I'm eager to see how. At last I want to thank you for your view of magic, I love authors who write magic as something limitless which only got its limits because the wizards and witches think it has limits and I love a Harry who practises early on and because of that learns magic which should be "impossible".

I'm quite flabbergasted how fast you update and thanks for your response, I think it's totally okay that you don't give away part of the plot and I love the foreshadowing in the third chapter, and I like your idea how magic works with its sentience but do you think magic is a interconnected thing and every wizard has a connection to it, or has every wizard his type of magic like a core or something similar and every "core" is sentient?
If you think long enough about it the first type would open up a whole lot of possibilities and explain fanfics with things like soulmates.
I hope now that Harry seems to have his own plans you give us more insights in his character which is developing at the moment, at the moment most of the things you've written was more of Vernon's POV and that's perfect for the introduction you gave but I would love some more Harry POV

Relly good story so far, i can already see him going into slytherin. I hope it continues.