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person CDGaymer
schedule October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
it will be curious if he gets the same wand as in the books, or a different want all together. will he meet dray in the robe shop. still wondering what house he will go in. very good story so far.
schedule October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking your story. Not that I don't like romance - and can't wait to see what you come up with - but it's really nice to read one that has a solid plot. It's really interesting! I'm really looking forward to the Hogwarts phase, however long it lasts.
And thanks for your frequent updates, too. I wasn't sure if you'd dropped it there for a while. So glad you didn't!
person BBWulf
schedule September 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great, was a little worried. Some authors are offended by the littlest of things. It makes sharing any opinion rather difficult, if not pointless. And I like the more realistic approach, slow buil and experimentation are usually great, as long as the author is at least decent. So you have no worries there. And yeah, I'm pretty sure I'd at least see the more obvious clues being thrown out. Not that it matters a whole lot, I'm not a homophobe, I'm just not interested. :) As for continuing to enjoy things, I'm sure I will. You've already proven to be a great author, and I quite like almost all of what I've read thus far. Haha, anywho, thanks for this chapter, and I'll be sure to check the fic often for an update. :)
person Tesgura
schedule September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating story and I'm only sorry I didn't see it sooner. You don't get in trouble for changing areas btw, people change the pairing area very often after they realize the pairing in their stories so mods don't even notice it. I can't wait to see Harry in Diagon Alley, possibly telling someone he doesn't need a wand or at least seeing how he deals with all the people and attention.
person Sweet Wisteria
schedule September 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter- poor Ren. Why was Mrs Applegate so hard to ensnare? Was it her personality, or was she a squib or something else?

I think I'm most excited to see how Harry will deal with 'traditional' magic. Can't wait for the next chapter!

As for switching sections, I don't know if you'd get in trouble. That seems a dumb thing to get in trouble for, but what do I know?
person BBWulf
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of 'slash' pairings, but I'll be damned if this isn't a good read. I do hope, however, that you won't be too offended if I skip over any 'lemons' that may pop up in the future.
person lolol
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see you back, love the new chapter and am interested how Renerets opinions of Vernon will shape Harry, you foreshadowed already very well that Harry will get more independent for Ren and I like it. As for relocating the story, I think before you do ask a mod to be on the safe side but I understand AU/AR means a story where you don't just change some aspects and follow the canonline but use something like a different school than Hogwarts or a world without magic or something alike so your story should be totally acceptable in the normal section and I agree your story has to get more recognition
schedule July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this so far but question?
I was wondering what would happen if Mr. Malfoy was the person that was coming over.
Its just an Idea. Cause can u imagine what would happen because he is a Wizard and the fact Harry is Using so much magic he could since it.
And can then tell that his Uncle is using the boy.
Oh and very well done I can't wait to see what happens next :)
person Sweet Wisteria
schedule May 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the most fascinating pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. I hope you'll continue. I love your Harry and his spiders and animals. Your Voldemort (or at least the piece of him that's in Harry) is pretty interesting too- he seems almost afraid of Harry, despite the fact that he's teaching him more about magic. I think V's curiosity about Harry's powers will come back to bite him, one day.
It's still early, but do you know who Harry will eventually end up with? When I first started this story I was thinking you were pursuing some sort of Slytherin Harry who might have ended up with Draco or something, but the more I read the more I feel like your Harry- when he's older- would need someone closer to his power level, like Voldemort. Although, I still hope Harry ends up in Slytherin (I'm a slytherin too!)but I guess Ravenclaw would make sense- Hecate is a raven, after all.

Anyway, I don't normally leave reviews, but I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story! Thanks!
person Sweet Wisteria
schedule May 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Also, I have a suggestion.

Your hits and and review count are a lot lower than they should be for a story that's written this well and has such an interesting plotline. I know that this is technically AU/AR, but I have seen fics that are much more AU in the normal HP section. You may want to consider relocating this.