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for Three Conditions

by goldhorse

person m0nt
schedule July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love it! Can't wait to read what happens next.
person starr
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Happy your back with an update, missed ya, so next time the marriage , lets see how that goes !!!!!
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I've missed my favorite author!!! Hope you and yours are Ok!!! Yes snape is an ass but he's awesome!! Can't wait til the next chapter!!
person SlytherinEnchanted
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your writing. Your stories always make me happy and this one does not disappoint. Can't wait for the next installment!
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You are such a great author!! Now you've sucked me into another story. Yay!!!
person Kimbovet
schedule May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love devious Draco...& devious Harry! Hee hee! Welcome back from the destress vacation.
person starr
schedule May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so happy that Draco is taking this so well and we help out ..... to bad you didn't explain Draco's face when he herd that he is to marry Hermione !!!!!!! Thanks for the update, missed ya !!!!!!!
person Trelweny
schedule May 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow. Hermione really dodged the bullet with almost having to marry the village elder, didn't she. Good thing Severus insisted she talk with Draco, and that Draco made it so quickly.
The village has a strange take on marriage I simply don't understand yet. Perhaps I will in time.

Hermione needs to be less stubborn about house-elves -a fault that is interesting to watch tackled in any HP fic including her. Certainly Elves shouldn't be mistreated to the point of Dobby, and coverings shouldn't be Gross, but Hermione needs to understand that in trying to Force her views on the elves as a whole she is just as "bad" as cruel owners. Forced isn't free.

Loved how Harry apparently described Draco. "Like the moon." Wonderful.

Did Hermione intentionally ignore how much Draco has wanted her and for how long? She didn't comment... which makes me think she's either overlooking or ignoring the intensity in him. Cause I'm all, like, WOW!

Interesting take with the Healing and Dark spells. Very intriguing when it comes to the village's stance too. Look forward to seeing more on that.

Thanks so much for writing!
person m0nt
schedule May 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love this story!
person M K J
schedule May 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Goldhorse....

I am in love. This is fantastic. I didn't think it was possible for Malfoy to be sweet, but he is. He really loves Hermonine. I cannot wait to read more. I NEED to read more.

Best,

MKJ