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for Three Conditions

by goldhorse

schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Glad to hear your mother is better, hope all stays good. Loved the update of the story. Can't wait to read more. 

person anon
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
loving it. please give them some alone time soon. they really need some time to work some issues out.
schedule August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love this story, so many ways it could go. Poor Draco having to take things on faith, something that he isn't used to. Can't wait to read more. 

person Illyra
schedule August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for this story. An all the best to your mom!!!

person Victoria
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am so pleased your mother is doing well now. Your comment about her looking like a Q-Tip reminded me that when my mom started to regrow hair after her chemotherapy, she remarked that she thought she looked like a "startled gosling'. :)

And I mustn't forget to mention, this is a terrific story. 

person Victoria
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The culture and magic of the Fang tribe continue to be fascinating. I also like the slow revelation of more and more parts of Draco's character. Great story.

schedule August 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Big. Fat. Tears. That's what has covered my cheeks as soon as Snape spoke. I had a suspicion after the description of he painting, but still! I truly enjoy your writing. Rarely do I leave a review mid-way thru a story, but this chapter pulled at strings I did not know were there. 

person Raz394
schedule August 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this story. I really like it. :)

person Missus_G
schedule August 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Very good! Glad to hear things are going better.

schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So very very glad you updated this story. I was afraid it had been abandoned. Can't wait for more.