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for Three Conditions

by goldhorse

person Trelweny
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco still doesn't know? The not-telling-the-father stories are always hard for me to read 'cause if my late husband hadn't had the pregnancy with our son... well he'd have only had the 8 days. Life is just too fleeting and unpredictable...
Harry's comment about not being there pretty much covered that though, didn't it.
I wish the two luck in finding the healer needed.

Thanks so much for writing!
person Victoria
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love all your stories (especially Junkies) and this one is no exception. There is so much is going on in this story. I'm impressed that you have invented and explained a rare form of magical cancer as well as its treatment. How exotic that Harry and Hermione are traveling to a remote tribe in Africa! It's sad that it has to be Harry who's suffering again, but given the causation of this disease it makes sense that he would have it. As for Hermione being pregnant, well, one never knows how a woman will react to the news of a pregnancy and her decisions do make sense in the context of this story. She's probably wise not to let Draco know about the baby. Who knows what nasty things his father would do to assure a halfblood never sullied the pure Malfoy line?....On a personal note, I am so very sorry to learn that you are ill yourself. I hope your treatments are effective and all goes well so you are soon better. xx
person starr
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yes so much drama but it's ok and poor Harry has me so sad !!!!!! so he dreamed of Snape interesting !!!!!!!!! and she should have told Draco , really don't know his reaction but how your writing the story I don't see it going down well !
person magneto_acolyte
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story cannot wait to see what happens next.
person eclectic_pet
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a sweet chapter. I liked it. The goading each other to take their minds off their troubles. This is how I envisioned their relationship as adults.

As always, More, Please!
person Nichole=hermione
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!! Can't wait to see how meeting the tribe goes!!
person cpetnm
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love gay Harry, but not gay Harry with gay Draco. ;) I'm actually surprised Hermione won't seek out Draco's assistance for Harry's sake, despite her pregnancy. It seems that they're getting desperate and a Draco might actually be able to help.
person Nichole=hermione
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story line!!! Can't wait to read more!!
person starr
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Didn't know how this story was going to be but started it and got floored !!!!!!! not only HG is prey's but you're also killing Harry !!!!!!!!! great I love it MORE !!!!!:):):)
person Trelweny
schedule April 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the backstory to the new potion. Hermione's conversation with Severus' spell was... enthralling to say the least. Did he manage to impart so much personality into his spell, and if so HOW, or is he somehow still connected to it?

ah, I can hardly wait for more!

Thanks so much for writing!