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May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well really good since I'm still picking myself off the floor !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks !!!
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May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you didn't make Harry really tall or Draco really short! That happens a lot.
Sex scenes aren't all about the sex, but the connection of the characters, what they're feeling, what the moment means or does to them and what changes or is confirmed in the relationship. If you understand that and communicate that for your characters, the rest will come. It's just schematics. Just a note, with those height differences, they won't always be able to kiss on the lips and enjoy each other at the same time!
Glad Draco came back.
Sex scenes aren't all about the sex, but the connection of the characters, what they're feeling, what the moment means or does to them and what changes or is confirmed in the relationship. If you understand that and communicate that for your characters, the rest will come. It's just schematics. Just a note, with those height differences, they won't always be able to kiss on the lips and enjoy each other at the same time!
Glad Draco came back.
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May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
For a sex scene, that was very sweet and romantic, and I'm glad to see you write it as such; so few do these days. Thank you. <3
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May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
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May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so good !!!!! so happy they are back together and that none saw Draco around his home !!!!!!!!!! Thanks for this !!!!!!!!!!!
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April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Shit !!! you had to do it did you !!!!!!!!!!!and you couldn't have Draco kind of let it go now !!! man what a mess it is !!! Thanks and see you soon again :):):)
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April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good conversation. So, now what is Harry going to do? Or rather, Draco? :)
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April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hm....hurry up and write the next chapter, pretty please.
On a more constructive note, I was a little suprised Draco just jumped and Jewel held no resentment, but perhaps that was just the spur of the moment. Can Jewel really trust Draco, just like that?
Not that I want them to not like each other. I really, really like seeing them becoming friends! They both need some family that actually cares and isn't dead. Oh...that sounds bad. They both have Harry, to.
Cheers!
On a more constructive note, I was a little suprised Draco just jumped and Jewel held no resentment, but perhaps that was just the spur of the moment. Can Jewel really trust Draco, just like that?
Not that I want them to not like each other. I really, really like seeing them becoming friends! They both need some family that actually cares and isn't dead. Oh...that sounds bad. They both have Harry, to.
Cheers!
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April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry hope all is well and Draco does not get mad at him !!!!!! they are brothers , that's one I didn't even think of !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!! :):)
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April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the original twist to your story and am enjoying it. Please try to differentiate between [your]-[belonging to you] and [you're]-[a contraction of you are]
Looking forward to the next episodes.
Looking forward to the next episodes.