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for A Vicious Tangle (Complete)

by Tommy-Lane

person Anon
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg he kissed him !!!!!

Oh oh so it has to do with my theory then??

Severus1snape
person moodysavage
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... what an awesome chapter. I think Harry would rather die with Draco while trying to save him than to watch him die while trying to save him. Draco doesn't realize yet how important he is to Harry.

That scene with the girl being pulled down the tunnel is just chilling. I love love love how it finally makes sense that someone is trying to ask Draco to save them and how they see him as a hero. Now I don't have to be terrified that the discs are going to kill Draco... just afraid of what Draco will be led to confront.

And one thing I love about your writing style is the small details that are just so natural. It's not like 'this is what Draco is thinking' being all obvious... but you show it so well in their actions. Draco being distracted and hitting his head on the doorway (which I love and find hilarious by the way), how you show how much they have been around each other and shared experiences like when Draco talked about Harry and his hero complex and Harry blamed Draco for literally pushing him, those smiles when they are amused at each other, and those arms Harry put around Draco right before they apparated away. I find those kind of touches protective and sexy. Very awesome :)
person starr
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
New to your story so good...your not going to get Draco killed wright !!!!! who the hell is doing this... to me it can be either Pansy or Zabini >??? really good love the way Draco and Harry have been together about a year but have never talked !!!! Nice can't wait for more Thanks !!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg.
so hooooooot

Severus1snape
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I'm so torn! I want them to kiss and just admit that they actually have real feelings for each other, but I don't want them to be sloppy drunk when they do it!!!!!! AHHHH!!!! I love when a story has the gang together! They are so much fun. Neville is particularly fabulous and there just needs to be more written about him in general! ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!!! This one was so much fun!
person Sephla
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! Still here reading this so please, please..... Please!... Don't stop writing. I've been reading from the beginning but don't get much time so I selfishly spend it too read 😊. I really like where this is going and I'm looking forward to more!
person moodysavage
schedule June 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes I'm still here enjoying this! :) sorry I don't review as much as I want to... things are freaking busy lol. Anyway... I love watching Harry and Draco flirt like they are right now. It's very sexy... but I wonder if they are too drunk to do anything about it!
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
SO Lanie - I HATE YOU !
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I
schedule May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Slow burns with a good plot are my favorite, that's why I love your stories!