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for A Vicious Tangle (Complete)

by Tommy-Lane

person moodysavage
schedule July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I just loved that. The whole dialogue where Harry was telling Draco how he likes the marks Draco leaves on him... and he likes others seeing how he effects Draco... and how he WANTS Draco... that wasn't mushy that was possessive, obsessive, and wonderfully sexy. My favorite type of confession :)
person cartman
schedule July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. I nearly had a heart attack when I found out that this story was unfinished and thought it wouldn't be completed. I was practically breaking but then I saw your update dates and it has given me hope and oh dear lord, please finish this story! It's absolutely breath-taking and I can't wait to know what happens next and how Astoria is related to the story. I hope you update soon!
schedule July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now that was a kiss! Many kisses, but I count them as one damn finally kiss! And it was such a tension relief. It's like, I know its a suspenseful, dark story with the terrible things from the war, and it makes my stomach twist reading about it, but I really do enjoy the happy, sexy love they have in all of it. The plot is fascinating, don't get me wrong. Just... you know... sexy cute men being sexy and cute. Ah, and the chapter before the last... heee. Salacious is a delicious word, and I don't know why I don't see it more often... Or sex on desks, for that matter. XD
person starr
schedule July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update and can it be that it's Astoria ????????well we will ee soon !!! see ya soon
person moodysavage
schedule July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh that was hilarious! Pansy specifically describing Draco having sex with Harry and Draco's like... I'm going to go get the cookies lol Very fun to see how much Pansy was enjoying that whole conversation.

And that next part where Draco kind of fell apart with relief when he realized that Harry still accepted him and even absolved him... that was wonderful. And the kissing... so freakin' sweet.

You are very good at being able to add humor to alleviate tense situations and you transition and balance the two flawlessly. Most times stories will have an ansty chapter... then romance... or whatever. You mix it up wonderfully :)

I'm guessing that Astoria will not be with her family?
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omfg that was so hot.
been dying for that. Love love.
heyy what about her 2 questions?

Sevie here Lanie
schedule June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY HELL, tha was too hot, wrong Draco
person starr
schedule June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow in this one you really have Draco a little dense not knowing that he is so hooked on Harry that anyone can see it !!!!!! but good !!! Thanks for the update !!!
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you updated! Very intense, this chapter. My heart was in my throat with the poor girl trying to escape. I love the line you walked of sexy tension and just crazy suspense. I can't wait to see what happens next
person moodysavage
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm still laughing over that whole trees conversation... especially when Draco asked if it was aftershave and he told Harry to keep up with the conversation because Harry had no idea what he was talking about lol. Draco's whole delivery was hilarious :)