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for A Vicious Tangle (Complete)

by Tommy-Lane

person Vrey
schedule February 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just amazing. I've been running across a lot of *fluffy* fic's lately that literally brought frowns to my face as I read. This was just so... complete. Well-rounded, exquisitely drawn out, and sexy as fuck. I really love how you portrayed Ron and Draco's relationship. I enjoy Ron-bashing fics every now and then, but this Ron is exactly how I imagined the canon Ron would turn out after he left Hogwarts. Lovely usage of Loony Luna! Congratulations on such a well written story!
schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gah, so I'm crying over Narcissa (on the inside.) That loving, selfless sacrifice to protect her only son
schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, ooh god woman I LOVE YOU and your amazingly brilliant stories.

I loved this ending, it totally made sense now to not know everything - like we all have our black spots we may never discover but we will move forwards anyway.

I love this end, so freaking HOT - but poor Ron with his hurt leg forever - waaaah - and he totally knew they were going to fuck once they met each others ha ha, I loooove Ron in your stories!

I cannot wait to read your next story !
person Jolene
schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic story and deserves a review that goes on and on about all the good bits but I suck at writing so I will just say that it fulfilled all the things I read HP fanfiction for. Just beautiful.
schedule September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I was surprised by the time jump, only because there were so many questions still. That said, the way you're presenting the answers is definitely interesting. My stomach is all in knots for Draco
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oooh - oooh - ooooh - sooo

brilliantly written - it flows, it explains, some - and what the HELL did Narcissa do??????

I loved this, and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE Pansy, I have never even liked her in ANY story before, but in this one, she is amazing!
Draco will have to forgive and move on, he cannot waste his life like this, it was another time and shit happened, so man the fuck up.
Shit happened to Pansy, Ron, Hermione and especially Harry too - and they moved on.

I cannot wait to hear WHY his mother erased his memories, maybe to make him suffer less, but in the end getting the opposite result really.

Please, post more soon, I can
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I fucking love Pansy! Oh, and I adore how you described the bond when Draco discovered the name. Creepy, beautiful, full of such power over another soul. Bad magic, not just fun magic. Loved the hug
schedule August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"I don't have minions." He murmured, his heart finding a fleck of peace at the obvious fear that she had been plagued with while worrying over him. God above help him but he did love her.

She sniffed and waved a hand over her head. "You have Potter, same thing."


Omg - too funny! I loooove Pansy in this!

And thanks so bloody much for making me weep in the very same chapter! Waaaah - So sad about Ron and then Draco is so grateful and Ron just shrugges.... ooooh love them all!

schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was divine... Lecherously divine. XD Poor, poor, lucky Harry, lol. So of course I have this little niggling question in the back of my head of; are they bonded or something? And I do mean Harry and Draco. Will it be 'undone' or just wound up with a pretty bow on top? Can't wait to find out. I really do hope Astoria gets some sort of redemption and life out of all this. I understand victims becoming tormentors too well, but I'm always so sad when it's their final transformation.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I so hate you Lanie, stopping here? Are you freaking kidding me woman!!!