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for Teddy\'s Pack

by Ronin

person Anon
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really sexy.

hope you write more fics like this. for harry potter and other fandoms.

cuckolding fics are strangely rare.
person jj
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
plz write more soon i cant wait to see the next chapter
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a story with a completely stupid premise. Magic can fuck up his erection, but it can't fix it? Harry, who'd taken down Voldemort, would submit to another man?

If I could give this a truly negative rating, I would.

person Anon
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good story. i enjoyed it as much as your naruto one.
hope to see more from you.
person Malchior
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So... Ginny and Harry go from having a very healthy sex life and loving relationship for over 20 years, to Ginny calling Harry a bastard and saying that she'd rather have a thousand of Teddy's sons than another bastard of Harry's and apparently coming to despise everything that Harry represents? And Harry, defeater of Voldemort, head of the Auror office, powerful wizard and full of confidence is just going to let Teddy walk all over him like this?

Yeah, I don't buy it. It'd be one thing, I guess, if they didn't have a happy and loving relationship with a healthy sex life, or if he had a small penis, or wasn't successful in life. But that's not the story you wrote. Especially considering the speed at which things turned around. Being cuckolded like Harry has been stems from a lack of confidence, which, up until his accident, wasn't something he had to deal with. Even still, the timeframe of how things came about is far too short for Harry to submit so easily, or for Ginny to have turned so bitter and violent towards Harry. She's only had a short time to be unsatisfied with Harry, so unless she's had many years of pent up frustration and dissatisfaction with Harry as a husband and lover, (or you go with the 'classic' of Ginny being a cheating slut-whore cunt bag /sarcasm) then this story doesn't really "work".
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
loved the twist that harry set it up.

would really love to see you do a story like this for naruto.
either naruto doing this to sasuke or sasuke to naruto. or maybe kiba doing it to both of them.

sorry. i know you said you were tired of naruto but it's my favorite type of fanfiction.
schedule April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm honestly going to say...that was disturbing and i hate Ginny.