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Yes yes yes!!! definitely keep writing!

IT is a nice start, even though I really hope that the incest will not take place, that is really really squicky. I would hope that Draco can win his heart and show him what love it.

Really liked this first chapter, and although you say you aren

Very interesting. I look forward to more and hope that you continue this story.

I don't know why you where so worried it's a nice story so far.

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i like your story so far - but i can already see how it could be difficult to finish if one would simple write whatever came to ones mind...
it would propably end in many chapters going like "i want harry" - "no, i want him" - "me too, i want him even more"
... i can already see james trying something to get harry for himself

so in order to make this story become something new - something fun to write about - i would try to decide with whom harry should end up first so that the rest of the story can be interessting.


personally i am a fan of sharing harry in some sort of harem
if i had to choose one partner for harry i would always go for tom riddle or bill or charlie weasley <3

I like it so far. Please continue. I think a slytherin/Harry is a great idea. Hopefully Blaise, but anything is good

An interesting start. Will the suitors figure out what is up with James and team up to address it, or will one suitor see how wrong it is and try to rescue him? I personally like Draco so far.

Interesting start to the story, can't wait to read more. Personally I don't think there are enough rabastan lest range/Harry or I also like Draco/Harry or voldimort/Harry whatever you decide to do is fine though. Keep up the good work