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for In Fond Remembrance

by T-W-O

schedule April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh...poor Draco. I wanted to punch that Nurse Ditch in the face on his behalf.
Interesting about there being no living sperm in his sample but living sperm inside Hermione...I wonder if something about Hermione herself is the key.
I suppose I'll just have to keep reading to find out. Hehe.
Thanks!
person pickles
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter...
I wonder if their month away on the retreat and location had something to do with the reproduction
waiting for more
person pickles
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh yippee skippee a new chapter
thank you so much
like the woman control of the man
have a feeling Hermione maybe having a set of twins or triplets.....
which would be very interesting in itself
I think Hermione is going to find out there have been some house elf help too
busting draco in the middle of her multiple pregnancy would be a hoot
waiting for more
hopefully soon
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Google translate is a great guide, but it doesn't get the nuiances and fluent speaker does ;-).

Ch.1

"Il est en trein de saigner! Regardez ce que vous avez fait!" -> "Il saigne! Regarde ce que tu a fait!" (the second part is up to you. "Vous" is formal, "tu" is personal.)

Ch.3

"Pa-pa! Vous avez trich
person pickles
schedule April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH MY HURRY HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
I can hardly stand to sit here with the excitement of the parental expressions..
I'm glad he is becoming educated in the ways of the "real world of the average person".
Waiting for more but hopefully not to long.
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah the joys of having children...there have been many frisky fun times foiled by the needs and demands of the wee ones in the RavieSnake household. Glad to see Draco handling it so well. He's such a good 'Pa-pa'...though not the best roommate apparently. Boys are messy.

I appreciated that he tried to find her and that he is already calling them his family. Keep it up!
person nari-chan
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
awesome i just read the newst chapters and i cant wait to read more :) im interested to see what will happen to our first time parents and get to see what the beginning is all about :)
please update again soon
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm enjoying your story so far. Keep up the great work.

I don't want to assume but if you want some help with the French, feel free to email me @ jujube2802@hotmail.com
I saw a few mistakes as i was reading and figured i'd offer.
person Victoria
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely great story. It's got sweetness and steamy sex in equal measure. I love the beginning of their relationship.
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More soon please! I'm really enjoying the style of writing in this adventure down memory lane.