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for Please, Release Me!

by Severus1snape

person Jan
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they are hot together! I like how Neville's confidence is coming slowly but surly ^_^ please update chapter 15 soon.
person ObservantOne
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I havent came that hard in a long time keep up the good work, before your story i thought i was straight haha
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Bah such a crazy week and now that I finally manged to make it on I get 2 chapters! (And I'm sure it's not just for me, reviewers tend to be fickle BUT even if it was I'm so very happy your writing it!)

"Better be worth the effort of undressing again"

BEST LINE! Loved this chapter, so very sweet and poor old Snape with his fragile heart.

Off to the next chapter ;)
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH DEAR GOD, that was HOT! Seriously like...mind freaking blown right now.

"How in Morgana
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Thank you for updating regularly, I hate it when it takes ages to get another chapter because by then I've forgotten what the story was about.
I *think* this is the first Snape/Neville romance story I've read, and I quite like it :)
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just found this and I LOVE it!!! Very hot! please update
schedule April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :) I love Neville as a tease! And their after the fact snuggling (I bet Snape is the most prickly snuggler until he passes out and then he probably nearly cuts off his bedmates oxygen after he's zonked out) and banter was so cute.

Looking forward to more soon
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahh funny, sweat, hot, and sad all rolled into one. I loved Neville's running commentary to himself while he was brewing the potion, I couldn't help but giggle at it, and go Neville forcing a kiss from Snape.

Of course now they've just trespassed further down a dangerous, rocky rode.

Update soon!
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot, Neville to the rescue with his badass knowledge of plants! Good thing he got there in time and fingers crossed obtaining the remaining ingredients won't be to hard.

Also him grumbling to himself about Snape and his lack of 'fucking labels' just had me cracking up.

schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
just caught up with your story and it is brilliant by the way i posted chapter 9 :D