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for Please, Release Me!

by Severus1snape

schedule May 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god, I tried to drag my mind from the gutter, I really did but then I actually read that chapter and now I need a cold shower, very quickly. I don't think my mind will ever find it's way from the gutter again. That was so freaking hot, I think I found my new drug...
schedule May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful last two chapters! So sad with Snape contemplating his life before taking over Hogwarts (though really why in the fuck didn't Dumbledore have more people looking for the horcruxes? Honestly leaving everything to Harry and NOT even explaining anything properly!).

Anyways very interesting concept having deputies from the four houses, though I'm surprised he told them he was still on their side and I was not expecting for Malfoy to have turned but I'm very happy about that :) And goodness that was HOT! Love those two together.

Can't wait for more!!!
person Jan
schedule May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was one hot chapter, I wouldn't mind more of those ^_~ please update chapter 25 soon.
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh you tease! I've been reviewing as Heather beford by the way I only just got round to signing in haha. When I saw back to school I was so excited to know what was happening and bam you end it at the doors haha. Is Sev still headmaster in your world? How will they all react when they see hkm at the staff table? What will the other students say? So many questions, so little patience lol
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20-

First off I'm soooo glad to hear your not going to kill off Snape, but I get the feeling that this is not going to have a happy ending :( I would love to be wrong though!

OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! I just...OH MY GOSH! Snape was there the night Neville's parents were tortured and he saved him?!?!?! Ahhhhhhh that's just so sad and heartbreaking. SNAPE GO AND COMFORT HIM YOU EMOTIONALLY DAMAGED MAN! And maybe Neville needs to comfort the older man as well. It can be a mutual comforting. Okay I'm rambling, I just didn't see that coming!

Bah, must read the next chapter RIGHT NOW...
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21-

Hey look at that they heard me! Nice comforting each other gentlemen ;)

Very sweet chapter and oh silly Neville, doesn't he see how much Snape feels for him? And I love Dean in this, he makes me giggle every time he opens his mouth.

Next chapter here I come
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Tease, tease, tease.

In case you missed it, I feel teased on oh so many levels! Firstly, yay their back at school but gah they didn't even make in the door!! And Snape's not headmaster? Is he going to be at school at all? I feel like there really needs to be a smutty scene in the potions classroom ;) I can't be the only one...right?

And secondly, love the ending line (but TEASE)! Ginny told Harry he's bent huh? I'm glad their broken up, always thought their relationship seemed a bit...weird.

Can't wait to see where your going with all of this. Next chapter please?
person Heather
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg I could actually see that entire scene so vividly, I LOVED it, I can't wait for September to come so we can see how they work their relationship in the school, I'm thinking maybe his friends finding out is so they can help them to sneak around? Please update soon :)
person Jan
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'll have to agree with Seamus "That was fucking hot man!" I can't wait for more hope I'll be seeing more soon, so please update chapter 22 soon ^_^
person kakashi
schedule May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg! This story is bloody good! Why didn't I read it before? Never mind I'm happy that I saw it today!
I've never thought about this pair before your fic but now I'm addicted. Please update soon!
I love Severus and I like how your Neville is getting confident. It makes him sexy!
I hope you plan a happy ending. I hate sad endings and that's why I can't forgive Rowling for killing my Severus. After so many pain Severus needed a happy end like living in peace and freedom without being bond to voldy.
Hope to read from you soon