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November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ugh that was horrible! But beautiful at the same time, I like how you did this scene like Neville was almost standing back from it all - all emotion and closer. So so sad!!!!! I have no ide how your going to tell the rest if this fic with him gone but I greatly look forward to it!
Lane
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November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapters!
Love Ernie standing up to Snape and Amycus and how moved Snape was by the trust comment...ugh my heart. The magic in the castle was an interesting idea, especially that it was Slytherin that had come up with it! And of course Neville and Draco, whats not to love there(and even a mention of Harry, hehe)?
Can't wait for more!
Lane
Love Ernie standing up to Snape and Amycus and how moved Snape was by the trust comment...ugh my heart. The magic in the castle was an interesting idea, especially that it was Slytherin that had come up with it! And of course Neville and Draco, whats not to love there(and even a mention of Harry, hehe)?
Can't wait for more!
Lane
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October 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why indeed wouldn't they want to enjoy a little bit more of heaven? Sev is such a perv 😁 getting off by images of Neville and Draco together😍 LOL, please update chapter 44 soon.
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Love domineering Neville :)
Lane
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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, didn't mean to pressure, but I'm glad you updated 😁 Always love when Severus is completely open with Neville, so sexy😊 hope to see chapter 42 soon😉
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October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay,😃 your back! 🎊Congratulations! 🎉 it's always exciting when your expecting a little one 👶👣
Please update chapter 41 soon.
Please update chapter 41 soon.
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October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was sweet and tender :) snape better not trick him and erase his memories of them....
Lane
Lane
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September 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First off, congrats on the wonderful news!!! A baby is a precious being. Second off, I love this story. This is the first Neville and Snape I've ever read. You make me want to read more of the couple. But I don't like the cliff hanger because it leaves me hanging!!!! :( at a good spot too. Well can't wait to read more of your wonderful work .
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September 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've had an account before but lost it. After reading your story, I had to create a new one to review this. I never, ever eeever thought I'd like Snape/Neville. Never. I didn't know I needed this in my life but I needed this in my life. The Neville/Draco side ship threw me for a loop! I'm a HP/DM girl. So, adding that Draco fancies Harry made me happy!
My only complaint is that, with Neville being Neville, I think casually killing someone no matter how bad they were would illicit a more conscious heavy response from him. Or maybe it hasn't registered because of shock? I am eagerly looking forward to reading more and seeing were this ends. Hopefully good but if it stays cannon my heart would hurt but would be an interesting dramatic ending.
...maybe a side story of Neville maturbating to a portrait of Snape telling him what to do? Oh, oh my.. so naughty..
Anyway, lovely story glad you continued!
My only complaint is that, with Neville being Neville, I think casually killing someone no matter how bad they were would illicit a more conscious heavy response from him. Or maybe it hasn't registered because of shock? I am eagerly looking forward to reading more and seeing were this ends. Hopefully good but if it stays cannon my heart would hurt but would be an interesting dramatic ending.
...maybe a side story of Neville maturbating to a portrait of Snape telling him what to do? Oh, oh my.. so naughty..
Anyway, lovely story glad you continued!
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September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap, what is Neville going to do with Alecto's body? How will Severus explain her death? Please update chapter 40 soon. 😍
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