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Poor Snape! Evil, evil snake man for torturing him. It's a good thing Neville was nearby, though how in the world is he going to heal him? Does Snape have some crazy plants in his apartment for Neville to whip into medicinal purposes? Mhmm, can't wait to see what happens next :)

My goodness you are a ninja! I didn't really think you'd have another chapter up yet and lo and behold you have 2 more, yay me! Loved them, the scene with Neville and Snape was just so incredibly sweet (by the way you wrote female instead of familiar voice). So it sounds like Snape knows he will be back when school starts back up? interesting.

I loved the interaction between the three boys, Dean had me cracking up ;) I have little (alright maybe huge) wish that Snape with somehow manage to show up around Neville's birthday.

Can't wait for more!

Ah....the story is too awesome

Oh goodness! Neville ordering Snape around, why is that so freaking hot?!? Evil, evil place to stop, gahhhh. Post more soon :)

I do believe I'm melting. You great big tease you! On the plus side you may well have just made yourself a new friend, my husband is going to love you when he gets home and finds himself swiftly undressed ;) but back to the subject at hand I would lurvee to see Neville dominating SeSeverus, I always sort of saw it as an underlying part of his character with him having so many masters. Looking forward to your next installment :)

Eep. Loved it, poor Severus scared of being kissed, I hope Neville can change his mind on that soon.

Ah you're welcome!

Lovely chapter, it was so cute when Neville was trying to teach Snape how to hug, I couldn't stop giggling at it. And Neville had dreamed about his snarky professor? Naughty Neville ;) Their such an unlikely pair and I'm excited to see how their relationship progresses. You could go so many different directions from here and I look forward to watching it unfold :) I have a feeling he's going to break Snape down inch by reluctant inch

Update soon!

I love, love, love Neville and how you have him teetering the line between the brave Neville we see at the end of the series and the Neville who flinches and sticks to the back of the classroom. I never would have put him with Snape because well...its SNAPE and he's so mean to him, but it works really nicely here :) I have a weakness for stories where their somewhat forced into it and lo and behold they LIKE it!

I like how Snape can read Neville like a book and gets mad when he starts mentally berating himself and it's an interesting concept to think that he had been so awful to him in order to 'toughen' him up in order to help Harry.

This had to be my favorite line: "That was NEWT worthy." Ahh praise from Snape! Soak it up Neville! And the sex scene, holy that was hot!

Awesome job!

I like this, its nasty and kinky and cute in a way..maybe skip it up a bit and show sometime away from one another see if theres any thoughts about one another...IDK just think aloud LOL

More, more always more. I would also like to see where you go with it plot wise. Obviously the current very very sexy scenes are awesome and I'd love those to continue too