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for A Slow Seduction

by MoonlightVision

schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well, if she doesn
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter you should read my story slytherins redemtion and tell me how you like it
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Progress, a little. lol At least he wasn't mean to her things time. He is still making her crazy, but he's doing it nicely. ha ha ha Thanks, HG4eva
person lexiatel
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What Malfoy said to Slughorn was so aweful, but very much like him. The Bastard, lol.

Poor Hermione.
person lexiatel
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Maya and Draco are cute. ;)
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The interactions between Draco & Maya are amazing.
person Samara
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
is Maya going to be an orphan ? who's parents died in the war? like Neville..
then may be Draco's relationship with her will be like a sister he never had.. that'd be nice and it also can make Hermione see his good qualities.. :) it was a great chapter.. I enjoyed reading it.. happy writing. :)
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Like it, one thing though, please keep Draco roguish, don't make him to pleasant.
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, such a sweet chapter !
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good to know he's not a complete tosser, at least with Maya. I hope he realizes sooner than later that Hermione isn't a toy and his actions can have real consequences. Thank you again! HG4eva