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for The Splendor Is Waiting

by Lomonaaeren

person ChaosLady
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Hermione's back! I'm glad Ron and Hermione are willing to tolerate Draco. Also that last ritual was beautiful. Wonderfully written!
person starr
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you it was a wonderful ending to it !!!!! :):):)
person blj
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great idea for a story. Nice rituals also. Thank you for introducing Harry to some Wizarding culture. There's very little of it in the books. Instead they follow the regular calendar, Christmas and Easter holidays!? I also appreciate that it's older traditions and beliefs. Seems the Weasleys only care about food, robes and quiddich. Also money and heroes if you count Ginny. Too bad Sirius wasn't around long enough to teach him about his heritage. Hits a sore spot with me. My people are losing our native tongue and many traditions,too.
person BAFan
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5

Thank you for including Hermione and Ron and Neville in the final ritual. I loved this little story.
person SP777
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

I was going to say something, but it took me 3 hours to read this chapter, started
doing something else. :-/

But it was good tho'...I liked the idea of 'rite desire' [I think that was it].
person starr
schedule April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow !!! way to go that was so hot !!!!!!! funny Ron doing the planning for the wedding !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
person BAFan
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4

Beautiful chapter - simply beautiful.
person ChaosLady
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! Dreamy.
person ChaosLady
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful ritual. Excellent update!
person starr
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow the full moon was awesome !!!! I like them together !!!! so good can't wait for more :):):) and god please don't let miss know it all get in the way !!!!!!!!