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for A New Land, A New World

by Madam_Weasley

person starr
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG Charlie is crying !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far.

One thing though: if Gina is only 26 years old, how could she have possibly been teaching for 10 years already?
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Their date was really sweet and it was interesting to see the start of something developing between them.
Family dinner is sure to be fun though.
person starr
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved the benign!!!!!! and with Charlie and Bill , going to be so good !!!!!!!!
person starr
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well don't be afraid , it's a good read ! to say that when Charlie said flying I almost died laughing here !!!!! really good so see you soon !!!!!!:):):)):):)):):) ??? just her and Charlie ?????