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for A New Land, A New World

by Madam_Weasley

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Overall, the dinner seems to have been a success. Not too terribly surprised about how Ginny acted because she's done that before but I would have thought Fleur to be nicer considering she has been in that situation before and knew what it's like.
Anyway, glad most of the family accepted her. I just hope this trip through the floo ends better than the last considering she has eaten now...
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good job with the chapter - loved it.
person starr
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok how did I miss the making love chapter !!!!!!!! they are so cute and Molly never changes !!!!! not too much of a fan of Molly but can live with it !!!! Thanks can't wait til ( we meet the parents and family ) ????!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, you're doing fine so far.
Looking forward to the upcoming family dinner and everyone's reactions.
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see both of them get things off their chests. Plus reading about their first kisses was a sweet bonus.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's heartbreaking seeing them both struggle like that but hopefully it'll get better soon.
person starr
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so funny to see Charlie at like that , he can't even talk....need to fix him up fast before she thinks that either he don't like her or he is a little bit slow there !!!! loved it !!!! see ya :):):)):):)
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This slightly insecure side of Charlie is interesting. Then again, if you want something so bad you can't think straight and it's happening to everyone but you (at least the touching part), it would make anyone start second guessing themselves. It just didn't come out the best way in Charlie's case so far.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how she is going to react after that bombshell.
Good cliffhanger though.
person starr
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
he had to go to Hermione !!!!!! wow and to do that in front of the muggle!!! Charlie has lost his mind !!!!! So funny, can't stop laughing at the situation here !!!!!!!!