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by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person starr
schedule April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG feel so sorry for Molly that she is scared of her daughter , hermione should be car full of Ginny if she escapes she should watch her back !!! Poor Harry being with a nut there, you need to get Draco to make it better for him !!!!!!! and visa-versa too Thank you for the update....and BTW Hermione is NOT a slut ok !!!!!!!! my poor Snape that nurse needs some kick ass there !!
person ChaosLady
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Exciting.
person loisa
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Reading your end note I couldn't help but completely agree with you in saying that Hermione is not a slut. I never got that impression about her at all. Yes she has slept with Neville and with Harry in this story but she's young, free and can do whatever the heck she wants.

Moving along from that, I'm eager to read more about how Ginny is somehow a hidden potions master and how she did this all along with Ron and Astoria.
person Victoria
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a gripping story, with mystery, sex, suspense and intriguing mental patients. I understand how this story could be a good one to work on whenever you need a break from other stories. If you have an inclination to write it, I'm in favor of a threesome with Draco, Harry, and Hermione at some point. I never have seen the appeal of Hermione with Snape. Yes, his voice is sexy but the rest of him isn't all that appealing. I'll bet Neville has some kinky sexy plant tricks that would be fun for Hermione to explore, too. It would be nice to give her time to have plenty of fun now that she's away from Ron and single.
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hating GINNY..... I HOPE that she has used some kind of spell on Ron cos I really cannot see him as this bastard, really, cheating yes, but this? No way!!! Astoria, well, I figured that anyway!

Cannot wait to hear about Luna again... I hope she will go with hermy..
Pooooooooooooor snapey... I
person Carlie28
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! And I don't see HG as a slut either. Can't wait for more!!
person lexiatel
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! Molly afraid of Ginny though, Le Gasp!

And Hermione is not a slut. She lives on an era where everyone has sex, and she did it with her friends. Plus she's not doing it all the time, lol
person pickles
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
whomever the reader was must have confused yours with another because I can't see it
great chapter it read to quickly
need more
please
please
how did Hermione get even with the woman?
what was given to snape to make him fade out like that
waiting on pins and needles
person Nikki
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Write more dammit! You got me addicted on this and I need my next dose! ;) great plot! Haven't read another like it actually
person brittany
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you are going to finish this story! it's really quite amazing!