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for Insanity Check! *Complete*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person hunter
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I want to take back my previous statement, I was only about 60 percent sure that Ron was one of culprits. it confused me as he didn't really have that much against the three victims and you didn't need to get him out of the story because you already did by having him cheat on Hermione. But I figured I'd just go with it, that is until I started thinking about that other lady the Nurse I can't remember her name at the moment but she always rubbed me the wrong way and I think it might be her.
person Amarenima
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That's very bad. Excellent update!
person Tara
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story! Takes me back to when I was working as a nurse and had to deal with similar less magical situations. I can't wait for more Snape goodness!
schedule July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!! Please keep it going. Cami is creepy as hell! Like a mini Voldemort! Can't wait for the next chapters :)
person Amarenima
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus! The Bella/Cami storyline is very interesting. I look forward to seeing it develope.
person starr
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Snape your killing him not being able to be with Hermione !!!!!! man she had to move out cause Harry and Draco were to loud Funny !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The rivalry between Bella and Cami is getting amusing. Excellent update!
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! I look forward to reading the next. To make the year go faster you could write time skips maybe by a month or more. At the very least I look forward to Hermione and Severus working together and becoming friends. That at least gives a good reason why they have become so close, in such a short period of time. Keep writing.
schedule July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing and I look forward to reading more. This has been. Wonderful story to read. I hope that you write include some hope that Cami and Luna can make an improvement. I look forward to how Severus and Hermione's relationship changes. An email notification when you upload the next chapter would be very helpful.