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by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person Anon
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad ending, but seriously, one little psycho vs. one of the most intelligent witches of the age, AND her ex-Death Eater boyfriend whose morals are fluid at best? That had better be a short fight.^_^
person pickles87
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you for an exciting story... but to end on a plot twist is just evil...
waiting for more..
person ChaosLady
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!
person starr
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG just one more chapter and it's done !!!!!! how !!!!!!!???????? so much to fix !!!!!!! Bella , Cami, and the rest !!!!!! I'll miss this one !!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what I want to see in the next story but there should be a sequel. I think Hermione should (eventually) fully recover. Then the hunt for Cami should begin. Hopefully it won't get to the point to need a prophecy for someone to take down a dark lady.
person Marvolo
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! I think I speak for everyone when I say SEQUAL! It doesn't have to be son since I'm sure you'd like to work on other projects but I would love to find out more on Bella and Cami. There is nothing scarier then an evil child.
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG - I loved this chapter. If Hermione doesn't find some way to show and teach Cami about love then history may be at risk of repeating itself. I would love for Hermione to make that potion banned due to the ill effects it has on children (or at least try to have it banned). Keep writing and update soon.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"You would know him as Lord Voldemort."

I believe this is an OH SNAP moment.^_^
person starr
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG so Cami is another dark lord, ok well kill her !!!!! yea what is up with dear Bella there !!!! and what's up with Hermione and Snape !!!!!!!!
person hunter
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I knew it, I long ago figured out that Draco's wife was most likely behind it. I also figured out that Ron and Ginny were behind it. Sadly :(. It makes sense, you had to get Ginny out of Harry's playing field so that he could be with Draco, but I didn't want it to be true.