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by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person helga1967
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really apreciate your tale. I'm not fan of Grenger/Snape but your history is very good and the timing is excelent.
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but this could have EASILY been cleared up with some Veritaserum and Angelina giving her permission for that to be given to her. Why did they not just do that? Seems like a big old plot hole there.
person lexiatel
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Um... I can't fathom Neville doing it, he has changed, but it would be too obvious, erm?. But Luna's warning makes me think it was Hermione... :o
person starr
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well I really can't think that Nev had something to do with what is happening but I can be wrong.....Hermione needs to find how to help Snape and Malfoy !!!!! and whats up with Harry and Draco with the kicking ???????????????? Thanks !!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg !!!
person ChaosLady
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay, when you end a chapter on a cliffhanger, you need to pick up where you left off in the next chapter. Otherwise, confusion ensues. The poisoner is either Neville or Hermione's trainer. I'm not sure I like this chapter.
person Aranel Anira
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Saw that there was an update and was like "aw yiss". So I don't think I commented on the last one. But after reading chapter 9 I'm super torn. Some plot thrown in I see. Man...I don't know what to think. Is Neville a bad boy now? oh man...will hermione ever sleep with harry again? will the patients come out of their drug induced coma! I await further chapters.
person Bournespeed
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving your story, fingers crossed Severus gets moved to the Manor with Lucius in the next chapter.
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG - this is the first time I HATE Angelina...
I love Hermy and Harry in this, they are so sweet and caring - and I HOPE hermy will work for Luce, and maybe even move Sevie out of there too, to somewhere else and Hermy could take care of him too!
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me that those two have been imperious'd or someone has polyjuiced themselves to look like them. The 'totally out of character smile' is the most telling thing here.