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for Legacies

by Frostbite

schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
loved the introduction of the wild hunt!
person djaddict
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really cool ritual, very nicely done.

A few surprises as well. Looking forward to more.
person starr
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last chapter you did, and the new adventure begins !!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! I can't wait for next chapter.
person pooh
schedule March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Frostbite, what an appropriate name for this year...
Good story, I hope to find a new chapter soon...wish there were a better way to find out about a new chapter...
person Jan
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see Dumbledores reaction when he finds out that Harry has taken control of his vaults, and that they are going to take back everything he has taken from Harry, plus have charges' against him ^_^ please update chapter 5 soon.
person nari-chan
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love lilies vault! now im super stoked to see what happens to harry after he does the ritual and what powers he has when he is unbound.
i simply cant get enough of this story and cant wait to read more of this delightful treat :)
please update again soon
person starr
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update OMG can't wait til all find out about this !!!!!!!!
person djaddict
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good update. I like the vault concept, I think that is unique.

A brief nitpick, several times in this chapter you use except and excepted, when it should be accept and accepted.
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. very interesting. look forward to reading more in the future.