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February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really nice. Good story, captivating start, maybe a tiny bit on the short side, but otherwise it's great, and you're showing great potential for the story. Keep up the amazing work!
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February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
go on Snape and give it a go and see what happens !!!!!!!!!
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February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet I hope! Can't wait for more!