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for The New Werewolf

by germanfanfictioner

person Katsplay
schedule January 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I think this has an opportunity to become a great story if you chose it to.  Like the wolf that turned Harry wants him back and the pack and Draco won't let him take on of their own.  Also Draco feels the mating call for Harry.  Well it could work.

schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Maybe you could have two other one shots just showing what they're up to after this one. It was really good.
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it please go on! Just, if possible can you make smaller paragraphs? It was a bit hard to follow....
person djaddict
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes please continue. H/D please
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think you write romantic, passionate sex amazingly well. The only change I suggest is breaking some of the paragraphs apart. The text-wall is intimidating, and some readers will quit as they start losing their place, re-reading sentences, and breaking the "immersion effect" of the story. I stuck with it and found it very good! I'd like to request that you go with Draco/Harry/more-somes.