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by ssdawn

schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! But I'm afraid it's going to be a dead end!! :(
person pickles87
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you
person starr
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
their foreplay was so hot !!!!!! and yes they both needed that , thanks for the update and hope that the next update has them all trying to find who has the kids !!!!!!!
person starr
schedule June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so good , about time they get together !!!!!! yes and hopefully with hermione's friend they can save all the kids and get those two ass holes !!!!!1 Thanks so much for the update hope to see you soon again !!!!!! are you going to make the bad guys someone we know ?????????????
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person pickles87
schedule June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!! Why did you stop there???
great chapter waiting for more
person Victoria
schedule June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione is all over the place in her feelings for and about Draco. Hot one minute and cold the next. I think that's realistic given their history. As the chapter ended it seemed some passionate angry sex was about to happen and that will probably soothe the ragged emotions they each feel. Meanwhile, I cannot imagine how horrific it would be to not know what was happening to your child. Not sure I'd be able to function with my precious son in the hands of crazy, cruel people. I hope something on the case breaks soon....I like Hermione's French friends and co-workers with their easy banter and affection for her. Great story.
person Trelweny
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You write this so wonderfully... I spent the whole time trying to read through my tears.

I so hope there's some sort of happy ending.

Thanks for writing.
person Victoria
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was an emotional one. Tough to read, especially on Mother's Day. I hope our brilliant Hermione solves the case soon. I'm wondering now if she is the target -- if maybe the kidnappers staged a kidnapping that would draw her back to England from France.
person starr
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yea well I think you had everyone that is reading this crying all over the place !!!! poor Draco what he is going thought now is unbearable !!!!! and Harry with just thinking it !!!! Thanks for the update and please update soon again !!! :):)