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Hey, Locke here, love your story and I'm very sorry I've not been able to review until now. I must congratulate you on writing a story that has actually held my interest past chapter 2. Most seem to lose steam or become repetitive after that but each chapter is something new. As to the current chapter, I get the sneaky feeling that Victoria it's up to something and that Teddy's going to get the bad end of the wand for it. I'm thrilled that I've found someone who can actually write a decent story without it being 90% porn. Anyways,
Wishing you well,
Locke Lamora

I am glad your mother is out of the hospital and I hope things are going very well for all of you. Thank you for the update and getting Ron out of the way quickly and relatively painlessly. lol I am glad she so easily defended them, even though she's still concerned. I look forward to more soon! HG4eva

well like always men can and women can't, witch sucks !!!!!!!!! Thanks for the updates !!!!!!!!!!

I just got through reading chapter 7 and am very confused.
When exactly was Lupin single when Hermione was around?
He was with Tonks the entire time.
Hermione was off hunting horcruxes and hallows with Harry for a year.
The very day that they returned was the day Tonks and Remus died.
So, yeah, unless they never went on their quests, then there is a big hole in your story.

Yay! More to read after this. :-) Thank you for such a sweet date, so far. I am glad no one caused them any great issues and that Teddy got what he wanted in seeing her in public. I hope Hermione is starting to figure out what she wants and can commit to Teddy, so she doesn't break his poor heart. Before that, I hope they have a great rest of their night. :-) Thanks! Onto 13... HG4eva

Thank you!! All my worries about her faded away in the first few paragraphs. :-) I am glad she's truly in this to be with him. They may have a hard road ahead, but now I can get fully behind them, since she is. I am also now REALLY jealous of her, because she has all of that. lol Your writing is never horrible! lol Thank you, HG4eva

Hi there! First, never apologize for what you write or how you write it. :-) Your readers will interpret as we see fit anyway. lol You are a fantastic storyteller and I get so into your stories that I find myself (as you have seen) being happy, sad, proud, and angry at them. That's a compliment to your writing!

Now, the review... my heart still aches for Teddy and his feelings of inferiority for Remus, but I am glad she gave him the memories for three reasons. First, it made me better understand and forgive her. I feel so much better knowing she wasn't just blase' about the whole deal and I am really sorry she was hurt and used by someone she trusted. Second, Teddy needed to better understand (as did I) the situation, so he could see that it wasn't love or even lust, but instead a cruel man who used and abused a young woman's trust and need for stress relief. Finally, I am glad she gave him the memories as she did so that he could see a full picture of his father and not just know him as a saint or sinner. I think you did a marvelous job on it! I am glad Draco wanted to give Scorpius the world, but I did want to pluck Astoria in the nose through the first scene. I enjoyed the glimpse into the negotiations, though I still think being engaged at 13 and planning to marry at 17 is a bit ridiculous, especially for people who live to be in their 100s. What's the rush, sheesh?! lol That's enough rambling for me. :-) Thank you, as always! HG4eva

poor Hermione Rose is going to drive her nuts now !!!!!!! so funny loved it

that was so sweet and to have been with Lupin 3x and Teey understood, well good for him cause I would not have....hope all goes as Rose wants it to with Malfoy !!!! Thanks

Great story so far! Love the personality you've given Teddy!