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for Temptation *COMPLETE*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay first, where you insane?! Good gracious! I thought taking 18 credits a semester was too much. lol I am glad he came to make her talk to him, and I am glad she told the truth. I just wish it had been sooner, or that Bill or Fleur would have told the truth when they found out. Sigh... I hope they make it through this next test together, too. I really hate Astoria and I pray Rose sees the truth of what she's turning into by being with Scorpius. I also hope Draco has a horribly disfiguring accident and loses all his money, just for marrying such a bitch! Gah!!!!! I look forward to more in the hopes that Rose is brought to see the light and Teddy and Hermione can be happy together for more than a day. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person Josy
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just want more!! Everytime i see that you've uploaded a new chapter My heart skips a beat. I love This story so much!
person starr
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well ine ? does Rose feel bad that her mom is a muggle ??????????hope not and if not she needs to know what thatching said to Hermione ....God Bill's daughter is an ass ok poor Teddie paying for it ....so good ....and about Rose and Scop don't know but she needs to see and know all that happened and if it's true then she can go and shit with all the Malfoys !!!!!!!!!!!!!!and where is Ron in these can't he do or say anything or is he just an dumb ass as always !!!!!!!!!!! Thanks !!!!!
person pickles
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH CRAP!!!! Didn't see any of that coming.. I have a feeling Rose is going to be in for a rude awakening. Especially when she hears the phrases Scorpius mother was calling hers. I have a feeling that the boyfriend would like to hang at the Granger house. Just WOW.... Glad all is cleared up with Teddy but the Malfoys are looking for trouble. Wonder if Draco has said Hermione's name while sleeping one to many times for the Mrs. to be pissed. Waiting for more. PS this is my night of surprises. Bought V C Andrews book Christopher's Diary: Echoes of Dollanganger... Didn't realize it was book 2. It is good as a stand alone but the ending is a supper surprise. Book 3 coming out in May and I think I'm hooked..an
person Jaxpendragon
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Mrs. Lupin............That is so NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just when it gets to the good part of the chapter....a cliffie.....You ARE EVIL!!!!!!!! Seriously though, I am loving this story and I hope that Victwat is just telling a fib. I don't think there are any of your stories I haven't liked and greatly enjoy reading.

Jax
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, good gracious! I surely didn't see that coming. Now, I feel so badly for her and I hope he has a VERY GOOD explanation for all he did to pursue her, just to break her heart. I know he's young and all, but I can't grasp that he would be that cruel on purpose. No idea what's going on, but I trust you to fix it. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So sad!
person starr
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well if it's true Teddy is just like his father an asshole !!!!!!!!!!! Hermione should just hex him !!!!Thanks for the update
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Though harshly written, I was on her side with the letter to Rose. The way she wrote her letter screamed "Malfoy" and I would hate to think of Rose becoming someone who thinks themselves better than others, or "above" her own parents. She needs a reality check and Astoria still needs to be smacked! Now, the letter to Teddy... sigh... she didn't read all of his and hasn't seen him in months. But, he also apparently hasn't come around to see her, so I do wonder what's up with him, too. I do know though, that Hermione is really not ready for a relationship when she could toss one away so easily without even questioning him. She's supposed to be the adult. I know her insecurities are leading the way on this, but she hasn't really tried to fight them. I don't know... sigh... Thanks for the update though! :-) HG4eva
person pickles
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YIKES!!!!! Oh please tell me you are going to upload the next installment immediately..... Can't believe how you left it again.... I think you love torturing the faithful readers... it is an amazing chapter but for all of us that are really really enjoying this story please upload ASAP