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for Temptation *COMPLETE*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person pickles
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yeeee update...
thank you
sometimes people mean the best but just don't realize it is good or better than before
person Blubb
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How many kids will they have?
schedule March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Crazy, busy week, so sorry so short. Reading on my phone. Now, I'm ticked with Scorpius. lol But, I am glad Rose isn't completely horrid. Thank you! Teddy = spoiled, but lovable. :-) Thank you, HG4eva
person Josy
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What? Ending This story? Already? I WONT allow that! I love this story too much.
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for yet another great chapter. I HATE Skeeter. Sigh... I had hoped they would have a bit more support, as the world is going to be against them, so I am sorry Molly and Andromeda have such issues with it. I know the age gap is a jarring thing, but they should know these two well enough to see it wouldn't be a fling type of thing. I don't look forward to how they will all take it out on her, nor that he, in his arrogance, will brush it off, so she is alone in her hurt and worry. I know he will try to be there for her, but he is in many ways still a spoiled child, so I don't know how well he'll do with it. :-) I am rooting for them and REALLY glad Ron is fighting for her and not against her. I also look forward to someone putting Rose in a long time out! Thank you, hon! HG4eva
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Teddy is back, but oooooooooooooh I wanna smack the Malfoys!!! I hope Ron will kick Astoria
person starr
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well glad that everyone got it with how Rose is acting, hope she gets fixed !!!!!! yes next time Teddy !!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks !
person Trelweny
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderfully mature prospective on Lavender!

Thanks for writing.
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Funny, but I didn't even miss Teddy in this chapter. lol I love the well-rounded story you're building for all of the characters. :-) And, brava!!! In one chapter you made me not hate Astoria, agree (a little) that Hermione needs to be more open-minded (though the M-word stuff has got to get gone from the Malfoys speeches!!), like Ron a lot more, smile at Lavender's maturity, feel horrible for Molly, want to ground Rose until she's 25, and want to shake Draco until his teeth rattle (arrogant git!). I hope they can all come to a better consensus and help Rose remember that she's still a child, and now a horrible one. I also hope Hermione can get some love from Hugo someday. It's sad that her son doesn't seem to care about her at all. :-( All in all, another brilliant chapter! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story. Just one point...it's "Victoire", not "Victorie". I always thought Astoria was the "good" Greengrass...LOL.