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for Giving A Chance

by Leania07

person BAFan
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

Things are getting exciting. Can't wait for the next update!

"Dinner passed uneventful. . . ." Uneventfully.

". . . There are many door traps where access to anyone can reach;. . . ." I'm sorry, but I don't understand what this mean. Could you explain it, please?
person Jan
schedule February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A lot of new(for them that is ^_~) and interesting info are resurfacing, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next ^_^ please update chapter 10 soon.
person staar
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG tell me how I missed 2 updates !!!!!!!!!!!! so good, the letters were WOW !!!! I see Snape is at pease yes ....well lets see what happens now in the chamber !!!! update soon :)):):):):))::)))):::):)):
person Meechypoo
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So we meet Salazar and find out so many things they've been taught are s very wrong....wonder who's fault that is? Hint hint his initials are AD. Severus may finally be able to forgive himself now that he knows those that died never blamed him. Will he catch on to the last nuggets though that Albus recommended Peter and knew Sirius was innocent but let him go to Azkaban anyway! Let's hope our boys find those other portraits really soon and I wonder who Hermione will actually be descendant frommnownthat we know for certain that there are no such things as muggleborn!

~~ Meechy
person autumngold
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful! I am so glad that Severus and Harry now know to protect themselves from Dumbledore. Hopefully, with the founder's help, they will be able to right the wrongs that both Dumbledore and Voldemort have done. Fabulous story! Can't wait for more!
person Kat
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing post
person delia cerrano
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How could they wait till after dinner? I would have wanted to go right away. I'm glad they are now able to talk more freely to each other.
person delia cerrano
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Continues to be a very original and interesting story. Can't wait for more and your pairings are, for the most part, just as original as your plot and just wonderful! Always love Severus and Harry together. They are the perfect pair...neediness, bad childhood, determination, & love for those they care for and besides Harry gets a father figure as well as a lover & they both get the family they want so badly.
person staar
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well hell hope Snape now know that the headmaster did that to him and Harry 1!!!!!! they all need to be careful of him now !!!!! Thanks for this !!!!!!