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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is quite unique. I am interested in seeing where you go from here.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck... Very intense and just fiery. I want more fic like this.
Do keep up the good work.
Do keep up the good work.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been messaging on the forum challenge thread and I've got to say this is by far my favorite story on the site.
I've never come across one that has hit so many points in my book before. This is the kind of work that keeps bringing me back to this site.
I've never come across one that has hit so many points in my book before. This is the kind of work that keeps bringing me back to this site.
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May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update?
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April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, I have wanted to read this kind of Harry/Fleur story for years so I was really please when i found yours. Update soon and keep up the good work.
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March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like how even though Fleur started this out as a game she's slowly getting more and more invested, I hope this'll have a happy eneding, because it's really hot, and something sad would just ruin that.
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March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I like that you have a "Sort of" sub Harry, but haven't made him a soft spined weakling. Your Harry makes sense, he's a bit young and inexperienced, so Fleur can sort of control him. But he's still the boy who at eleven stood up to a dark lord and won. Whose killed a massive basilisk, and took on 100 dementors.
Part of me does hope we get to see Fleur see the Basilisk corpse.
I also like that you don't have Fleur being irredeemably evil or something like that. She seems like a bit of a bitch, but at the same time not necessarily cruel. She does care for Harry even if not exactly in a healthy way. It will be interesting to see i Harry saves Gabriella this time and what events happen afterwards. Also if Fleur's friends will end up involved with the two.
Part of me does hope we get to see Fleur see the Basilisk corpse.
I also like that you don't have Fleur being irredeemably evil or something like that. She seems like a bit of a bitch, but at the same time not necessarily cruel. She does care for Harry even if not exactly in a healthy way. It will be interesting to see i Harry saves Gabriella this time and what events happen afterwards. Also if Fleur's friends will end up involved with the two.
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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot. Harry is a sexy beast. He and Fleur destroyed one another. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is actually flirting with being really very dark, but not actually being so. Yet.
It would be kinda wondrous if, with the dynamics of their relationship staying in tact (Fleur being the dominatrix), this somehow ends in a light tone with her falling as hard for Harry as he has for her. Harry would have to be strong, but still a sub, and I'm not sure how that works.
Equally, this could all blow up into an angstfest.
That would be a shame.
It would be kinda wondrous if, with the dynamics of their relationship staying in tact (Fleur being the dominatrix), this somehow ends in a light tone with her falling as hard for Harry as he has for her. Harry would have to be strong, but still a sub, and I'm not sure how that works.
Equally, this could all blow up into an angstfest.
That would be a shame.
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February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a hot chapter. I can't wait for more.