rate_review Reviews

Loved the new take on the heels bond.

Oh, please don’t let it end here!

Please update!!

PLEASE continues the story, or is it's over? ANY WAY YOU. And happy holidays.

So when is next chapter coming up?

This story has been outstanding so far! This is what I'm talking about when I say that porn with plot can be ten times more interesting than porn without plot if done right! I also love the fact that despite being Sub, Harry isn't spineless and just takes everything without protest. He has a backbone, which a lot of people tend to forget when they want to put Harry in sexual situations. Well that or make him too dominant, which is out of character for him as well. He's very much a middle ground guy. Anyway, I loved this story and I seriously cannot wait to read the next chapter~ 83 I'll try and wait patiently for it.

I just don't understand why you had to make this story go this route to have Fleur as the most dominant partner in the relationship. :X. It doesnt make any sense to have the bird-like veela as having a huge penis either really..

http://www.the-scientist.com/?articles.view/articleNo/35898/title/Why-Many-Birds-Don-t-Have-Penises/

Sorry to be so critical, I actually really enjoyed your story it is one of the best written pieces of fanfiction on this site, and I really like the pairing. I just don't like the direction the last chapter took the story I guess. Then again, I'm a man who doesn't really like to see men as a submissive unless they are switches (meaning they switch from dom to sub). And I really dont understand why there is so much femdom,slash, "futa", "MPREG" stories written in the Harry Potter fandom either, but that is another story...

I adore H/F in every possible way even if it is this crazy. Anyway good story. Have never seen a veela portrayed like this. Also wondering about the canonish plot. You mentioned banishing voldemort, but never said a word about horcruxes. I mean the one in Harrys head. If he is part of the tournament, it seems that Voldy is atill gonna be ressurected in the end. Just dont mess it up.

wow so good...

love it

Not a fan of the futa. At all. But I do kind of love their relationship dynamic. It's clearly dom/sub, but a sub with an aggressive sub with a backbone. It's nice.