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for A Dubious Affection

by Tommy-Lane

schedule January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really liked how this was written. Harry totally damaged that clock and I loved how you described it... like it had been stomped on a few times lol. And I love messy Draco. Was it the eyes that had Harry so interested and staring when he had the goggles on. And Draco thought Harry was holding his breath because he maybe smelled!!!! lol oh my gosh that was hilarious. You do a really awesome job of putting funny things in Draco's thoughts that are totally serious to him. Hope you keep writing :)