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for A Dubious Affection

by Tommy-Lane

person Daria
schedule October 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story; it was refreshing to read a decent Draco/Harry fan fiction. I hope you decide to write another story.
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, I just wanted to express how freaking adorable this fic was! I mean, hot and sexy with great building suspense and all, but the two of them are just so damn cute. <3 I adore this Draco, quirky and whimsical, but still him. Ended up reading the whole thing in a sitting. Really glad you reviewed my own fic because I hadn't bothered to do much reading, and finding your writing has been a joy.
schedule February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
awsome brilliant LOVING it !!!!!
person starr
schedule February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending !!!!!really enjoyed this !!!!!!!!
person Qtness.Quill
schedule February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, LOVED this story!! It always made my day to see an update. It was so well done with a wonderful balance of angst, fluff, humor and steamy smut. I also really enjoy your writing style. Great job! I will be revisiting your fic when I'm in the mood for something I am assured is perfectly crafted.

PS. I hope a good artist creates a fanpic for you of Harry's besotted smile at a disheveled, oil-stained Draco with the goggles on his head :)
person AidaLily
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Long time no see.

Well this is an interesting story. I have rather enjoyed reading it through this far. I love how Harry just kept buying clocks and smashing them to get Draco's attention. Draco was rather adorably oblivious and Ron was cutely clueless. This fic inspired me to write a slightly darker Blaise-stalking-Ron one shot that I will eventually finish involving time and maybe a clock or two. lol I am working on Chapters 17 and 18 of RWS at the moment.

I can't wait to see how this finishes and couldn't help laughing at Harry desperately trying to get some in the hospital. -giggles-
person AidaLily
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This combination of lines just made my day.

"Draco's breath caught. "Potter-"

"Or maybe Harry. Cause you know...that's my name." He murmured, peaking at him through his soppy fringe, Draco's cock already half hard at the suggestion and the look on Potter's face."

I couldn't help giggling at that. It was so cute and such a hot little fun scene. I knew Harry liked that workbench and them goggles. It was such a cute story. I love Draco topping, but him on bottom really worked with this story. I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This has quickly become one of my favorites.
I'm sad to see it end, but it did go on a high note, with flashy fireworks and crashing waves.

Hope to see more from you soon

Anna
person Ecstatically_yours
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I lost it at dumplings. I even woke my puppy up laughing so hard. Can't wait for the last chapter!
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I only started reading this after you posted chapter 5. I'd seen it on the site before but the summary didn't ever really draw me in. There was nothing else that interested me tonight though, so I clicked on your story and I was immediately sucked in. I love when authors give HP characters interesting jobs, like you did with Draco here, that's what really captured my attention. He's such an interesting character! I like the denial and slow build up to his eventual realization/acceptance of his feelings for Harry. You made the progression of their relationship seem so effortless and gradual that I didn't realize how much time they were spending together either! I find managing and portraying the passage of time in a story to be a very difficult, but you have mastered it. I have so much more to say but it'll have to wait until you post the next chapter. I can't wait!