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by valkyrie136

person Loveandlaugh
schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this twist in dracos character and can't wait for hermione to really catch on to what he's doing. Your writing style is captivating and I'm excited for your next update keep up the good work
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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OMG Draco, and indeed a shiver just went down my spine. He is loathsome but there is also pain.
You cannot make me feel this....

Glad you like my edginess....
person ilariasantaniello
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
questo capitolo
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.


Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it

person louie lyn
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another wow!would Hermione fall in love with Draco or not? I like them to fall in love.You are really an amazing write.Reading dark stories is one of my favorites and this one is one of my favorites.Plz update soon!
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Oh he is loathsome, brainwashing her into insecurity....
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: This Draco is absolutely vile. And I know I'll keep on reading this....
person magi
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whew! you update fast.

I can literally feel Hermione's unease through the page. Keep it up!
It's a really great angle on an obsessive Draco. His
subtle slytherin is prominent.

p.s. just read that Tom Felton is sorted into Gryffindor, haha that would be an epic twist.


http://www.mtv.com/news/2055238/draco-malfoy-tom-felton-gryffindor/
person ilariasantaniello
schedule January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
u mamma qui le cose si fanno intense povera hermiona mi sa che draco giocher
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow!I'm soo excited!Why?Why did Hermione hate her husband?probably abandoned her children?did he forced her to marry him?and have children? Ommmygoshhh! I soo like!update the soonest pretty please!