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by valkyrie136

schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please update! :(

schedule July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I check every day for updates (: AKxx

person Anonymous
schedule July 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yesss!! Thank you for continuing your story. I was going back here for every few days just to check on the fics that I've been waiting for updates. Love your darkfics!

schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Aw thank you for the little shout out/review response. You have gotten me all spoilt here! I need moreeee! But I'm so glad you seem to be inspired with the fic and tearing your way through it. It's really a fantastic story that touches on  but doesn't overanalyse and explain - psychological issues. It's brilliant, and by far my favourite fic on this site. As I said, I read 3 fics on this site and two of them are yours (Shiver and Land/Monsters). I really don't have a favourite story of yours either - I lovedddd your lumione fic, and it was by far the darkest I've read. But it was brilliant. Maybe I'm a sadist? Maybe I'm fkd up? Whatever the reason, your fics always make my day aha. 

Can't wait for more on this story! I'm glad to know of Draco's reaction to her virginity- it's only served to twist his character even more, which is great. Hermione's reaction seemed very fitting, due to her already broken psychological nature. He definitely chose the perfect victim in this fic - she's already shattered. 

More more please!! 

Forever your Fangirl,

AKxx

person Anonymous
schedule July 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story! I love darker fics and have read a ton, but yours are so especially dark. Draco in this story is so scary, in a manipulative and realistic way that I've had to take breaks in reading the story because I'm getting a bit scared lol. This story is amazing, can't wait for the next update! (I'm also reading through your other fics they're all great btw)

person Anonymous
schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow, I can't believe how this story has progressed! Poor Hermione, your version of her is so much more human than how other people write her. I feel like all the cold shoulders and severe PTSD (not to mention extra trauma from Draco) will permanently damage her. This Draco is so dark, obsessive and I think is slowly becoming possessive and falling in love with her (as close to love her can get). I can't wait til' your next chapters, keep up the great work!!!!! :)

person Koi
schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

No!! You can't stop here!!! You have to keep going! I hate cliffy! I hate em I hate em!! stupid mean cliffy!! I want more! Soooo much more!!!

schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Another capturing chapter! I'm soooo excited to see what he does and how he reacts. Does he hate her for it? Does it excite him? Does it make him fleetingly remoresful or triumphant? The Mysterious Draco Malfoy! AKxx

person Koi
schedule July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

OMG!!! WHAT AN AMAZING 4 CHAPTERS!!!! I feel so greedy for asking for more and more and more, BUT damnit I want more! I want more of this dark and twisted Draco and this fragile Hermione!! I can't! I can't get enough! Please update soon like before! I am in need of more of this crack of a story!! XD  

schedule July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I simply love it. I'm enthralled and captured by your twisted Draco, and the vulnerable Hermione destroyed by the horrors of war and death. It's absolutely fascinating and I cannot wait for more! AKxx