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for The Returnof the Legendary Amarens

by looonylei

person Deathe
schedule July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't wait to read more of this! I also admit that Harry's name being originally Harvey is definitely intriguing!
person Leslie
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see where you are going from here!
person moodysavage
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist :)
person Rhea
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don't stop writing this story. It has soo many unexpected twists it's great. Please keep writing it. Can't wait to see if and when he accepts Draco as his mate and finds out who his other mate is and I want to see if he decides to be resorted into Slytherin and if he'll let tom/Voldemort live or if tom was the good guy from the get go and was there to protect him that night and was killed by Dumbledore somehow. Just please don't stop writing this.
person starr
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
more mates for Harry ?????????????????????
person moodysavage
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
aghhhhh!!!! I want more! Yes yes I know I'm greedy. I reread the whole thing again before reading the new chapter. I feel so bad for Snape and Draco. Did you realize that the preview we had in a previous chapter never took place? Anyway... so glad you updated!
person CDGaymer
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
what it not just gona be harry/dray/sev, but harry/dray/sev/omc
Good story non the less, more plz
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hey
great story so far
please keep updating
cullengal101
person Erime
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'd get a new beta reader if I were you--one who knows the difference between 'your' and 'you're.' Also, your first and second chapters repeat. In spite of a few issues with your spelling, (I'm a bad speller myself) this story has some potential. I hope to read more soon.
person starr
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok I get where Harry is coming from but !!! he needs to re-think things !!!!!! Thanks