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Last two chapters are repeated. Good story otherwise.

So far, this is very good, but Ch. 11 is the same as Ch. 10, author.

Interesting. Thanks for the update.
(though I think there were some formatting issues with this chapter you might want to have a look at)

Not too bad, though I think there are just too many people with the creature inheritance, and the disappearing and reappearing in different rooms/manors is a bit confusing.

Oh Severus what have you done? And who is with Harry? ........ From what you have written, it looks like Harry might of been raped by someone polyjuiced to look like Draco, please tell me I'm wrong?👀 please update chapter 9 soon.

wow that last chapter was really an eye opener !!!!!!! evil Dubbles , you will get killed ok !!!!! love it , the twist to it is awesome !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!

hey
brilliant chapter
please update soon
cullengal101

I got confused. I thought the silver eyed slytherin was talking about Draco.

hey
I like this so far
however a little note
in chapter 1 you have Severus's Amaren mark on his left temple.
"and his grey wings spread wide open, as his Amaren mark on his left temple burned, becoming visible"
And the same on Draco in chapter 1
"White wings spread wide open, his left temple branded by the unique mark of a dominant Amaren."
but in chapter 3 when Hermione is reading from the silver book you have put
"Dominant amarens have markings on their right temple, while the submissive have these markings on their left."
just a bit confusing.
thought you would like to know.
otherwise loving this so far.
cullengal101

hey
brilliant chapter
please keep updating
cullengal101