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for Two Steps From Hell

by Ssserpensssotia

person Relatela
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Can't wait to see what he has in store for Hermione in the next part!!!
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, fuck!
I literally squealed when I saw you posted the next installment. I was preparing diner, I had the chapter for dessert and yes it was sweet, like chocolate with chili peppers, yes twisted I know.
You did not disappoint me at all Hermione killing that bitch while Voldemort(I cannot stand Marvolo, sorry)fucked her from behind. I loved it, I'm surpassing myself for liking this. I will reread and reread this fic.
Don't you dare take it down ever.

Okay enough, let's move to part III.

Catching my breath now......


person Kelli
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter. I loved the bits with Voldemort and Hermione, but I am really liking the parts with Lucius and I'm curios as to what will happen with Harry. It just goes to show there are many ways to destroy someone as it's being done with Harry and the Weasleys. I can't wait for the next installment.
person Ice Empress
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was fully expecting him to stab her back, but he should probably wait until she is orgasming underneath him to horrify her more. That should assist with the clarity that she's playing with fire. As for Ron, he is a moronic fool. Money is money but because he is always in the shadows and the sidekick he craves recognition. He wants things that are always and forever will be out of his league. Hermione can't be with him.because he bores her with his mediocre mentality, childish whims and behavior and the fact he is able to objectively think concepts through. Thank you for the rousing updates-with such quick efficiency- and I can't wait for the third part of the trilogy. I am craving the erotic magic you shall weave.
person Kelli
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! My favorite part was the conversation between Ron and Voldemort. You really captured how he would use Ron's insecurities against him, just like the locket horcrux attacked Ron's mind in the book.
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cheering!!

And no I do not only crave sex in stories, I'm also a sucker for anticipation and story building.....



Now get it on already!
person Relatela
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yayy new chapters make me happy :)
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck all!!


Snake hard. You're kidding me that was soo hot...

How twisted am I to enjoy this soo much.

Fuckety fuck...

This has got to be one of my favorite pairings of all times.

And bad ass Lucius...
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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Speechless....

Wow, incredible intricate story You have got going here. I had to plow through the First three chapters.... Literally so. But J.K. Made me do it with her first book. Nearly threw it away, but perseverance is rewarded. Pfiew you are an amazing story teller. I'm hooked....

Bring it on!

They are so within character....wow
person Ice Empress
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You always manage to feed my dark hunger, desires, addictions and you do it so well with keeping Lord Voldemort as his psychopathic with sociopathic tendencies self. Hermione is shattering in such a beautiful symphony that I can visualize Voldemort twirling his wand as a baton. She is falling even though she has already fell and her inner darkness is raging. She merely doesnt realize it yet, even though Voldemort doesnt hesitate to remind her while she simply regards her darkness as anger due to falling into the stigma that darkness is bad. When she finally breaks from that she will ascend and be perfection. I loved the naughty bit with the voyerism and her willing yet mentally unwilling climax at his elegant hands.I think he should have bitten her and left a mark before sending her to the Weasleys.They would have eaten her tatted emotions alive, which only would drive her further into his arms. I can't wait for the next installment. Thank you.