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for Two Steps From Hell

by Ssserpensssotia

person Kelli
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was quite the ride. I love this story. Each chapter gets better and better. loved how you switched POVs of each character so we get a glimpse of their thoughts. That was quite the shock when we learn George's plan to kill everyone. Voldemort was especially masterful in this chapter as he directs the show and manipulates everyone. I love how you portray him. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Relatela
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I want to know whathe said!!! Such a long chapter and I still can't wait for more :)
person m0nt
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is my new obsession.
I will be honest with you, when I read the first chapter it did not grab my attention. That was when this story was named "I, Horcrux." I started reading this yesterday and I fell in love with this story. I like Voldemort true to his character and I love Hermione strong; because to me that's how I would picture them reacting in this type of situation. Not some head over heels, lovey-dovey puppy love that most fanfic authors (apart from Nerys, SerpentInRed and LadyMiya) seem to portray them as. I'm truly excited with what is going to happen with Ginny! I'm not a big Weasley fan, Molly Weasley gets on my nerves and Ron's insecurities would have been his downfall in the original series had it not been for Harry and Hermione.
I look forward for the next chapter.
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ow perfect, let Lucius have Ginny and be her guardian. As the Weasley's have such bad parental guidance skills.
(I'm evil right?)Provide us with as many details as possible. No, no, not perverted in any way , me nooooh.

Besides the prostitute can never be blamed or persecuted in my opinion, it should be the one who exchanged money for her pleasures, she is not of age anyway.

Please not Umbridge.....

Hermione is hooked line and sinker, Voldemort rules her now even when she thinks that she can say as she pleases when in private. It's a farce not?!....

Love the story keep it up!

Ps (maybe an outtake regarding a very naught or evil Lucius and Ginny, pretty please??? Pouting...) or I will be forced to write it myself... (no blackmail, just saying, you know well I need it) ok forgive me pressuring you....
person Ice Empress
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Its mere euphoria. The psychological manipulation and the fact Hermione is opening her eyes to the pain that her friends are being placed into while still reveling in the fact Voldemort hasn't hurt her that much. When will she see this is nothing more than a warm up for the punishments she will endure at his hands? The sex and violence is mind blowing in a way that makes you say "Hit me baby one more time", because you know they are both close to the edge. But Hermione will fall and shatter first and I cant wait to hear the trial. Evil despot, Delores really?! By my deviant mind to your talented fingers I am on the edge of my chair.
person Anggea
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Squee!!!
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Seeing stars.

Poor Harry.

Hermione is one sick twisted girl. Love it...
person Ice Empress
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Outstandingly Exceeds Expectations! I was so hoping he stabbed her but that can wait. Physical pain is meaningless when your are psychologically, sexually, mentally manipulating a person in such a bold and subtle manner. Hermione is so precious. She hates the creature yet when she killed it she was horrified. I suppose it is in her nature just to seek revenge and scar someone, not kill them. That was a stroke of genius and so was the deliciously dirty strokes Marvolo heaped upon her throughout the blissful chapter. Even the chosen ones have to be broken. I cant wait for Horcrux Mine.
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love you. That is all!
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I also love Voldemort in this, and Hermione. He's so hot. I love his outfits. I'm kinda sad he isn't real :/